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Join Date: Feb 2018
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very one flew over the cocos nest i like the valium part cause im big on name drops that are of what you personally like ingesting like the whole food segment that ran for like two lines of just pure taste cool cool.. the virus/eyelids section was dope to.. i like that there could possibly be a second part.. all in all in was structured well and was flowed for itself well and vocab done well.. story wise it was cool prolly the best part of it.. thanks.. master: this was really my cup of tea.. dude it was like if you was in brokenhalos head but with pretty insane and insanely pretty pov.. it was dope all around and it wasnt even line for line it was word for word was just so pretty.. very colourful and descriptive i love that you went that internal.. the story the was more of an enveloping discovery of oneself more then a story it was really engaging.. and i dont want to be like all bias but the alice part really sold me.. vote = master rock it was dope all round gl guys next round xoxo
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