RBN PRESENTS: Dizaster vs Detour (Free for 30 days!!!)

06-23-2013, 05:50 PM

detour took it...but man u needa slow down at times...also i feel like u needa change ur delivery at some points..i kno that u all bars n sht..but throw'n in a little comedic punch delivery i feel will slow it down and break up the monotny of some of ur stuff...like it'll give the crowd a chance to catch up...but yeah..id second what the majoirity has offered up as feed though...but u took it imo @detour

but it was writtens vs freestyle
n diz had some funny ass rebuttals
i dont even like diz either tbh

06-23-2013, 05:50 PM	#29
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	detour took it...but man u needa slow down at times...also i feel like u needa change ur delivery at some points..i kno that u all bars n sht..but throw'n in a little comedic punch delivery i feel will slow it down and break up the monotny of some of ur stuff...like it'll give the crowd a chance to catch up...but yeah..id second what the majoirity has offered up as feed though...but u took it imo @detour but it was writtens vs freestyle n diz had some funny ass rebuttals i dont even like diz either tbh