RBN PRESENTS: Dizaster vs Detour (Free for 30 days!!!)
 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acZmsjU5Qx4

lemme know what y'all think...it's much better on the official footage than the bootleg bullshit IMO...

smh @ killin niggas kids in battle raps tho...
dsapnt.

rd one detour for sure.
diz lack of prep is covered by his amt of time doin this shit.
he didnt really need it nigga had preboxed rhymes... real emcees recognize...
his shit was funny as fuck but so was D...

rd 2
damn@ the exposure, how bey of you...
letterbomb piece was fire...
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LMAO @ retarded love
cut ppl behind me was rofz, plus see how he let them niggas finish laughin
lmao @ niggas lungs tho. see how he said wasting punchlines? he got mad shit on deck obv this was mostly generic and to not say Detour got it is kinda dumb...
eat a dick niggas

tips and opinions
run the mountains nigga you need breath
keep ya schemes open so non rappers can hear wtf you're saying
id rather twitch then look like a dick tryina draw attention away from the battle. twitch harder

I could hear u.....but i doubt most could.....space out ur schemes.....an cant u hear the crowd? If they start to ooo an ahhhh take a moment.....let them get loud....makes u look better....ur worst fault right now is crowd.control an ur crammed schemes.....diz has schemes like that but he does them in bursts then lets the crowd.suck his dick after

His rebuttles were so fierce tho.....that cut everyone behind me shit was too raw.


I watched the whole thing yesterday

Had diz.....but u got bars...per usual...just gotta space em out

^ see?

oh yeah second the rebuttals... cut ya prepped bars down massively massively and get ya frees up my dude.
but if you store smaller patterns and more varied topics you'll stand out...
just opinions...

Though PJ's first round was prett dope content wise.

But pretty much was Bags said.

Keep doin. You, dog.

good shit detour
you're new style I like it
diz didn't prepare obv. all he had was the computer glitch shit, that was roflz
you lyrically demolished him tho,
wasn't even close, tbh

Dope shit dawg

also, SLOW down
when you go slowly, I can understand you, reflect on what you are saying and it allows your punches to connect
then, you speed up, and it's all I can do to understand what you are saying, no time to really appreciate what you're saying, if that makes sense

I'll continue the trend of constructive criticism.
Never do that "Pluuuuss you're crews a bunch of squares" voice or style of speech again.

Your delivery was much nicer on this than the bootleg, could barely hear that shit.
But slow down everything.
And since you got the old tweaks and everyone knows it now...
you should definitely have some punches on deck or rebuttals about it.
Same way Diz tries to make the fact he's lebanese cool by actin like some al qaeda boss

Looked & sounded a lot better on here than the other video though

second Philly on ixne on the 'squares' voice

the feedback is appreciated...

i spit a little faster than i usually would in this one cuz i wanted to beat dizaster at his own game, i.e., that rapid fire back to back rhyme scheme shit...

an it's hard to always tell when to give the crowd a second an when to keep goin...i do try to be conscious of that, but i'm still perfecting things namean...

thanks for watchin it...lol @ the criticism of the "squares" voice hahaha...i tried somethin different there with the vocal inflection...worked on damn jafar...

but word, i definitely take all the advice in an do best with it what i can...i like usin the back to back compounds tho', i wouldn't be me if i didn't do that...

I stuck this for you @detour

I think Diz won this. Props for Real Deal hand shake tho. he is dope for sure.
I'll be looking out for ya in the future. get over to KOTD?!?

Why don't u just get out of canada

record wont let me. why?

^^^same reason I'm not in KOTD yet...already talked to gully, but that said I think I'm battling at the next battle of the bay event in kotd fresh coast this september...

an word @ meth, g/lookin yo...

Nice battle

i dont know detour had bars he always has bars

but diz was back in his face and the freestyling and the rebuttals just made it to nice

i sitll think diz edged it

If we talking Baez I got detour honestly eve if Diz was free styling he made it look real shitty and detour that squares voice ain't as bad as Diz and his let me think what is relevant and rhyme with what I said hymn he always stretches like his wal mart rebutal

Detour u got bars gsm just like what everyone else said sharpen ya performance a bit and you easily control the crowd