[Round 3] 2. Advanced Placement vs (N/A) JaysonFresh/evaD — AP Advances

[Dominate]

No faking or bluffing - I take aim & get straight to the bucking
Going innnn with the 9mm. Jay does the same when he’s fucking
Anxious about who your girl sees - you never stop w/ the cappin
You’re trying to keep her circle small. I’m looking at her anus & it’s not gonna happen
She wants me to choke you to death – says she likes you less & less, square
Kicks YOU out the house … But tells ME “get that breath of Fresh, Aer”
& look, we could spar to the death… But you’ll get taken apart at the chest
I’ll land some lefts then have you dead to rights when I put your heart in arrest
I’m in the club getting loud. Rounds of shots - Sambuca then bourbon
Dave’s yelling TURN DOWN FOR WHAT … at the 100th woman to curve him
My hired guns know what the guap bout. One call & it’s an all out feud
Fuck a soccer avvy. If there’s a name & a number w/ MY shooter, he got an arm out too
Your girl is insecure and says she wants these fingers fast & hard
Takes three digits in the back for validation – she in my contacts list as MasterCard
People cheer when they see me & say I’m the greatest to air it
If YOU hear hoorays in this bitch.. someone threw shade at your parents

[sral]

[QUOTE=Dominate;819222]No faking or bluffing - I take aim & get straight to the bucking
Going innnn with the 9mm. Jay does the same when he’s fucking

LOL worded very clean, reminded me of Killing Spree’s stillborn line from earlier in the tourney if I’m honest.

Anxious about who your girl sees - you never stop w/ the cappin
You’re trying to keep her circle small. I’m looking at her anus & it’s not gonna happen

lmao

She wants me to choke you to death – says she likes you less & less, square
Kicks YOU out the house … But tells ME “get that breath of Fresh, Aer”

Nah I wasn’t so keen on this one, I get the idea but the execution was lacking for me

& look, we could spar to the death… But you’ll get taken apart at the chest
I’ll land some lefts then have you dead to rights when I put your heart in arrest

I wasn’t keen on this one at all personally, felt a bit lazy if I’m honest.

I’m in the club getting loud. Rounds of shots - Sambuca then bourbon
Dave’s yelling TURN DOWN FOR WHAT … at the 100th woman to curve him

Nice idea, not seen this done before.

My hired guns know what the guap bout. One call & it’s an all out feud
Fuck a soccer avvy. If there’s a name & a number w/ MY shooter, he got an arm out too

This one missed for me, just seen too many similar to this I guess but not necessarily bad, I just thought it wasn’t the most original concept

Your girl is insecure and says she wants these fingers fast & hard
Takes three digits in the back for validation – she in my contacts list as MasterCard

This is almost the complete opposite of the line above, worded well and a great idea. Very strong

People cheer when they see me & say I’m the greatest to air it
If YOU hear hoorays in this bitch.. someone threw shade at your parents

Ehhhh I was kind of indifferent about this one, not entirely sure if I caught it or not to be fair.


Overall I think Dave had a very strong showing here, Dom also had a banger in MasterCard which was arguably LOTB for me personally, Turn Down For What was good also. Aero had that anus line which completely caught me off guard and I thought it was hilarious, Fresh kind of had ideas I half-liked but his wording took away from the payoffs pretty heavily to the point where I felt like they were back to back light jabs not really doing much damage to their team at all. I think that’s what lead me to my decision here, Aero/Dom kind of had a consistency to them where I felt they did better as a team overall than Dave/Jayson did here. Dave and Dom were prob the strongest two overall but I think Aer/Dom did the best as a cohesive unit here.

Vote - Aero / Dominate

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by evaD

Look,

we ain't in the same class fellas. skillwise I eclipse these 2 m'fuckas
beyond me to 'talk game with lesser stars' than an angry yelp review of Dave&busters.

were u preparing to battle ur teammate if things went unexpectedly lol. the punch is ok.

while evaD got dat sniper scope , my silencer's aimed to your marrow
shiiit we can present with a List of ways to have our bulletpoint to an >>

I guess

& every punch i throw guarantees u cant withstand me
my fists connect like happy marriages while urs r caught sleepin with the nanny

lol liked this

yet when it comes to reputation I'm something of a famed author
Doms been castaway for sooo long. survives off spear fishing & plastic tarps for fresh rainwater.

ok

More generic gun bars from these nerdy kids n it’s about to be a murder bitch
Throw A and D in the wrong place and you’ll see that they yellow like a wordle quiz

liked this

Dave gets around w/ the chicks, they’re always down to bounce on my tip
You don’t make girls weak in the knees Aer, they just get tired of crouching to kiss

boring

& Dom claims gangsta from down under, what the fuck is your problem?
Yell out ‘strayaaa n you can catch one while I’m buckin at Austin

ok

The way his Aussie pride is manifested is sicker than you’d assume
Dom told me Ayers Rock hard and huge.. then winked and skipped off to their room

wack

Originally Posted by Dominate

No faking or bluffing - I take aim & get straight to the bucking
Going innnn with the 9mm. Jay does the same when he’s fucking

this must be aero gay shit lol

Anxious about who your girl sees - you never stop w/ the cappin
You’re trying to keep her circle small. I’m looking at her anus & it’s not gonna happen

gone lol

She wants me to choke you to death – says she likes you less & less, square
Kicks YOU out the house … But tells ME “get that breath of Fresh, Aer”

drip

& look, we could spar to the death… But you’ll get taken apart at the chest
I’ll land some lefts then have you dead to rights when I put your heart in arrest

tough

I’m in the club getting loud. Rounds of shots - Sambuca then bourbon
Dave’s yelling TURN DOWN FOR WHAT … at the 100th woman to curve him

lmao

My hired guns know what the guap bout. One call & it’s an all out feud
Fuck a soccer avvy. If there’s a name & a number w/ MY shooter, he got an arm out too

dece

Your girl is insecure and says she wants these fingers fast & hard
Takes three digits in the back for validation – she in my contacts list as MasterCard

lol fresh spin on an old approach

People cheer when they see me & say I’m the greatest to air it
If YOU hear hoorays in this bitch.. someone threw shade at your parents

idk tbh

if Im being honest I had dom an aer by a landslide. the wording and delivery alone just makes for such a better experience. conceptually they were probably more creative as well. dave an fresh were really dry an the wording made it a chore.

v dom an aero