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I fucked with it.
There was some slight mis-matching syllabically early on but nothing major enough to distract me from the enjoyment of it. It read like a simple enough finger flexing, done quickly to knock the dust off presumably. It’s cool enough for what it is, though I must admit I’m not the biggest fan of this/that type end rhymes used personally. Lol. It reminded me of @Witty in parts, truth be told, though a little less direct and planned out- this read more free form to me and less prepared, which is what I think you went for, more train of thought keystyle ish fun than anything else. It’s enjoyable. Keep that pen moving!
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