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Old 07-30-2021, 05:39 AM   #11
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story line : I portray the role as God, who years later had found out that I had a father of whom I had not forgiven due to our past differences. In this story line, God (who is portrayed by myself) has a father of whom had lost his mind in the process of training in his sorcery, only to discover his most inner evil secrets and in his darkest moments, had created me prior to his disappearance.

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as I stare into the eyes of my father in heaven,
I question the many trials and tribulations I've liven//
we share words with one another but our conversation has driven,
to places only our hearts know for mistakes we've committed//
.. two prideful individuals, consumed by hatred and evil,
myself being the strongest.. to guide him on his grace to be peaceful//
we've foughten for eternities.. as I've slaughtered his very armies and people,
plus his regimes but hell if I knew we'd later talk and agree to,-
.. discuss our own differences, like what the scriptures is,
and how our past beefs with one another could later diminish us//
we later spoke about his father and they're fathers before us,
and how this thing we call evil could in fact destroy us//
and the sacrificing it took to get us where were at,
like when our forefathers chose death so that we'd follow religious facts//
.. as our conversation had grown, we spoke more about life,
despite the foul shit we had said and done to each other over night//
they're was I.. face to face with my father,
I couldn't bother to ask, knowing our past but still had considerably offered,-
my genuine respect and love, to later be restored as his son,
as the night had fallen, I noticed we had much ambition//
but first, with myself being the creator of all existence,
who also created the stars and solar system//
.. thus said, I was eased in his presence, believed to be destined,
to mend our past relationship, and was feeding him questions//
like.. "how holy was thou in the presence of evil?",
"did your spiritual journey to master the forces of darkness defeat you?"//
"were you deceived at any time on your quest for knowledge?",
"to later discover you were consumed by its impressive power?"//

(to be continued)
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