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Old 04-19-2021, 10:42 PM   #3001
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Veteran, shatter-proof, but no stranger to leaks
if the rats get onboard, it's sure to leave a stain for weeks
In England, chips are fries, cousins to potato wedges
The flavor is soft yet pronounced and goes well with a tangy sauce
and the Irish famine left us with nothing; just cleaves and scurvy
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Old 04-21-2021, 12:16 AM   #3002
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Onions, sausage. Almonds in porridge
Mustard-dipped raw fish topped off with chocolate
Vomitspit, toxic. Lost in an ominous moshpit
Get the oculus off him, so he can see the Author of Knowledge
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Never been blessed more,
Gods rest called
I’m at deaths door with my bags packed and my test score.
And the pressure is less forced,
Unforgivingly,
And the weather is less fog,
More mystery.
Staring at the pearly gates,
I turn to face the world I hate,
But only hear the crackles of the burning waste and swirling haze.
I turn to pray.
Throughout life I poured memories to paper just left torn,
I just hope I’ll be remembered for something.
That dim light in your dead thought.
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Old 04-28-2021, 05:00 PM   #3004
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I got the invite from ya next THOT.
Modeling gig, she give nothing but headshots
Took it all in stride, with no sweat loss
Sunscreen her neck, jaw...
Then let her use my cock to wipe the rest off
Her sensei sensed pain & pleasure brought
So I put that long thing in her guts......
Sephiroth
Blacked out on her & her tender parts
Afterwards she asked me to autograph the censor bar
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Old 05-07-2021, 05:43 AM   #3005
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white walls and wedding songs
scattering sediment from unsettled scores
the fact that my presence became a epic bore temper lost
write you back when my mind settles on lesser thoughts

Dearly departed friends live again
in dimensions closer then your carpet
code of honors rising carcass godless
dearly departed friends live again
in dimensions closer then your carpet
I see the end arrive on a icy comet

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Old 05-09-2021, 07:33 PM   #3006
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Pick at your mind til your thoughtless
What you had in store, no one would acknowledge
No one would say you showed promise
Not a lot to roll with when you know the process
Broken down concepts & torn portraits.
All that horsepower turned to more corpses
Beaten til your presence performs morbid
& Every fresh concept is a forced abortion
More to pick at...you can explore the pits, trash.
Aim the flame with a Liu Kang kickback...
It's that...off the mind time... boredoms back
Keep bringing writers skulls, that's just more to crack
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Old 05-13-2021, 06:27 AM   #3007
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steal your attention and tweak the nerves wake up
speak the words a heart that beats to the bees and birds
soft knees so you need a nurse walk into the planet and see the hurt
put smiles on faces that heed the worst in the fire like you need to burn

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Old 05-14-2021, 01:20 AM   #3008
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I draw a blank as I think of what to say
I rob a bank and it's just another day
Because I work part time on near minimum wage
Out of shape, tons of time I waste
The tobacco and weed turn my lungs to paste
Half the site must be glad that I suck at rap
The beat and lyrics were good, but the delivery was fucking crap
I'm down and out, never realizing the dreams I must've had
Few years away from a heart attack
No end in sight if the start is bad
I spar for fun with a masked villain
Then lay in my bed staring at the cracked ceiling
I'm trapped, revealing all this to you
Because I'm honest and true
Maybe I just need some meditation
Or an adjustment to my medication
Don't worry, I won't overthink
Nor will I include you as one of my shrinks
Maybe all I need is a strong drink
But that will lead to a messy sink and some questionable links
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Old 05-14-2021, 12:15 PM   #3009
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Little bird, you just hide in the wings
I'm in ya girl faster than she slide on the ring
I put more ice on the links.
You put more ice on your drink.
A moron listening to More Life
Waterfall tear ducts & sore eyes
Delivery known to leave you fucked...
It's an escort line
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Old 05-28-2021, 07:13 AM   #3010
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shoals of trout in the sand rains form geometrical cascades
fucked a bitch off a backpage track marks on her fat legs
alphas in platonic pretzels neglecting a staircase
hooked on electronics cause the dark is mental
and in the dark the metal sparks a light so special
im kidding the fog is gaseous farts from devils
slivers of silver form anti microbial pots and pencils
its not so simple shifting sands on Schindlers list
a proper swindle to convince you shapeshifters still exist
it never matters just get some money and get a bitch
get rhythm get the pitch get the picture a image of a pitcher
ice tea with lemon pits presence got threatened ever since
I been trainsurfing on the present tense

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Old 05-31-2021, 01:50 AM   #3011
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Leave a whole crew clapped, then cap the captain as evidence
So what if you rap, you ass and that's been the message ever since
Fuck being a gentlemen, act jazzy get the uncle Phil treatment
You'll hit the lawn long before you experience real street shit.
So keep the fairy tales to the cross & hope that that book sells
Cause we all know very well how a joke that raps & looks well...
Like he's overcompensating
Stop with all that promise making
All the lies from those problems...hatred.
Probably waited for a response...
Like the doc when he's operating..
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Old 06-04-2021, 09:25 AM   #3012
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...how one responds contemplating
thoughts dawn upon a constellation
here's a consultation the operation
put the fiber optics in your locker station....

..block a sane man from witnessing a watch erasing
racing hands in processes spotting pigments in waffle flavors
your whole smock is art replacement that's constipation
it was a setup the whole spot is paid men
read it backwards and forwards then add the proclamation..

...heinous acts replace the fact kick the shins of soccer players
i hate to attack the raven black but others paint in proper language
of a replacement hack pull the pin and let grenades pop the basses
if justice is universal it will pay it back that current fades to Nosferatu
papers..

...trying to help but the wish hasn't felt
the actions splits on itself realization
every waking being dreams different rivers and wells
get took by the systems and shells swin with the fish
the movie has them biting on there nails that's quite a tale...

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Old 06-04-2021, 02:51 PM   #3013
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nightmare rockets another topic to pocket doom alot of snooze
maybe that's why you never had alot to lose got the blues
mind not mine to choose get a sign the words shine like jewels
sirens on the moon decay the summers bloom raisin butter brut
buffoon smell the zooms it's gassy invoke the fumes
back to a time when you felt amused
don't be confused whose to say you cant see in two's

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Old 06-18-2021, 01:37 AM   #3015
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Just trying to avoid the long bliss, I'll only stop for bong hits.
When calm hits, i usually use it to block the nonsense.
Time clicks, we pause for it. Wait, establish a time that sees fit.
Escape in passages in line to salvage a rhyme, ravish the mind that leaks it.
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Old 06-21-2021, 12:16 AM   #3016
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Sulfur on the glass, alcohol pad in a tin bin.

Earth moving fast now, trepidation is their language.

Huntsman spider rests in widow's peak, flare for the reds.

Media where the Achaemenid people lived. Heydays come and go.
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Double decker with sauce. A hotel ballroom covered in dirt from soccer cleats. Parties abound. Small pools of fish swim inside aquariums.

Harappa - what's the language there? Need a Rosetta Stone to translate but might not ever be found.

Navigate through the streets of Boa Vista, Brazil. UFO's eye view and plenty of chunks of Amazon lands cut out for beef tripe.
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Bodhisattva acknowledges the passing of the awaken man.
Only to shake his hand say 'that was a hell of a game my man'
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a safer plan some lies never told saved the land
lines never scrolled saved ya man the great expanse

trapped in matter I can taste a scam
go head play the hand i hear you folded
g00d faith will erase the strand break the scab

you'll never make it when its made to damn
you can hate me all you want cause im way to mad

Kawasaki way to fast can't stop what outweighs the mass
a world threw concave glass windex to wash they mirrors






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Stay clear of all that remains as the end of the day nears.
Pending daybreak, that moment before the sun rises and gets unwinded,
blinded by the darkness mended by strained fear. So i remain dear to the heart.
To the mind, to the start of all that we strive for and who we blame clear from the start.
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