Found this in my files PART 2. Dont think i ever dropped this either? Wtf

Geno · 01-21-2021, 11:34 PM

First things first, i dont know who i am
Cant tell weather or not im at home in my head
Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad
And somehow i never collapsed, i usually sat down
Its pretty bad when your entire youth is black out
I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect
Now im gettin to old for this ignorant shit, sick to my ribs
If i could, id lose my mind and claim ignorant bliss
But im stuck with the bad shit, and nothin but past sins
If we could go back, you'd see me redoing actions

Adverse · 03-24-2021, 02:25 PM

Awesome flow per usual.
Really liked the topic at hand and liked stuff like jog scrimmage/memory lapse.
Was dope, this was my favorite segment (not much feed to provide you’ve been doing this too long to need it)

“ Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad”

Universe · 03-26-2021, 05:20 PM

Yeah, flow was amazing in this my dude. Highlight was the section Adverse already quoted... loved that part.

Good read. Very smooth and casual while still dropping some knowledge.

Write more.

Mr. J · 03-26-2021, 11:27 PM

Nice work here Geno, that flow always been tight
Your style is refreshing when I start peeping these out
Always cool seeing you drop something...

I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect

^^^real shit right there
Overall a dope scheme you got cooked up
The verse was on some hard hitting life shit
Keep that pen moving & drop in the proper spot my g

01-21-2021, 11:34 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Found this in my files PART 2. Dont think i ever dropped this either? Wtf First things first, i dont know who i am Cant tell weather or not im at home in my head Theres way to many things i dont really recall Like how i wound up in this physical vault I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad And somehow i never collapsed, i usually sat down Its pretty bad when your entire youth is black out I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect Now im gettin to old for this ignorant shit, sick to my ribs If i could, id lose my mind and claim ignorant bliss But im stuck with the bad shit, and nothin but past sins If we could go back, you'd see me redoing actions __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-26-2021, 05:20 PM	#3
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Yeah, flow was amazing in this my dude. Highlight was the section Adverse already quoted... loved that part. Good read. Very smooth and casual while still dropping some knowledge. Write more. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

03-26-2021, 11:27 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Nice work here Geno, that flow always been tight Your style is refreshing when I start peeping these out Always cool seeing you drop something... I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect ^^^real shit right there Overall a dope scheme you got cooked up The verse was on some hard hitting life shit Keep that pen moving & drop in the proper spot my g __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

03-24-2021, 02:25 PM	#2
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Awesome flow per usual. Really liked the topic at hand and liked stuff like jog scrimmage/memory lapse. Was dope, this was my favorite segment (not much feed to provide you’ve been doing this too long to need it) “ Theres way to many things i dont really recall Like how i wound up in this physical vault I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad”