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Geno 01-21-2021 11:34 PM

Found this in my files PART 2. Dont think i ever dropped this either? Wtf
 
First things first, i dont know who i am
Cant tell weather or not im at home in my head
Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad
And somehow i never collapsed, i usually sat down
Its pretty bad when your entire youth is black out
I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect
Now im gettin to old for this ignorant shit, sick to my ribs
If i could, id lose my mind and claim ignorant bliss
But im stuck with the bad shit, and nothin but past sins
If we could go back, you'd see me redoing actions

Adverse 03-24-2021 02:25 PM

Awesome flow per usual.
Really liked the topic at hand and liked stuff like jog scrimmage/memory lapse.
Was dope, this was my favorite segment (not much feed to provide you’ve been doing this too long to need it)

“ Theres way to many things i dont really recall
Like how i wound up in this physical vault
I visit my thoughts, but i cant remember the past
Run scrimmage and jog, but i have a memory lapse
A rat in a maze, eyes glazed off the fentynol patch
Ive done way to many drugs, i remember the bad”

Universe 03-26-2021 05:20 PM

Yeah, flow was amazing in this my dude. Highlight was the section Adverse already quoted... loved that part.

Good read. Very smooth and casual while still dropping some knowledge.

Write more.

Mr. J 03-26-2021 11:27 PM

Nice work here Geno, that flow always been tight
Your style is refreshing when I start peeping these out
Always cool seeing you drop something...


I mean, ive lived a lot of shit, that i wished i'd forget
But i was sure there were good times that i cant recollect

^^^real shit right there
Overall a dope scheme you got cooked up
The verse was on some hard hitting life shit
Keep that pen moving & drop in the proper spot my g


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