Wwe The People

Adverse · 03-23-2021, 10:01 AM

Dope per usual, super long winded but not stale and most of all I’m impressed by how long you can take a concept and roll with it, it takes dedication in itself to be like “I’m going to write 100 bars about just wrestling references” sure some veer into corniness but they were still super enjoyable nonetheless, was never much of a wrestling fan but never questioned why people enjoyed it, there’s so much history and culture to the sport. Very good outing here my favorite segment was

“ It's called respect; That's just the name of the Game like Paul Levesque
Not impressed? Bam Bam Bigelow, fire off the top of the head
The road to success will pile drivers, it's no surprise y'all rubbernecked...
You just Say-bull like Rena Marlette, except you less pretty
I'm Brock with this, it's like Metropolis - Welcome to SupLex City
So maybe I'll introduce myself like Mr. Kennedy (Kennedy), the mic rope's bait
Chris Benoit, I have to put my neck on the line just to pull my own weight
But I ain't listening to all that Gobbledygook like Pete Rose in hiding
I'm like an Earthquake with a Typhoon... Dragon Steamboats behind me”

Brock with this/metropolis and then tying in the suplex city was nice, keep writing fam

03-23-2021, 10:01 AM	#3
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Dope per usual, super long winded but not stale and most of all I’m impressed by how long you can take a concept and roll with it, it takes dedication in itself to be like “I’m going to write 100 bars about just wrestling references” sure some veer into corniness but they were still super enjoyable nonetheless, was never much of a wrestling fan but never questioned why people enjoyed it, there’s so much history and culture to the sport. Very good outing here my favorite segment was “ It's called respect; That's just the name of the Game like Paul Levesque Not impressed? Bam Bam Bigelow, fire off the top of the head The road to success will pile drivers, it's no surprise y'all rubbernecked... You just Say-bull like Rena Marlette, except you less pretty I'm Brock with this, it's like Metropolis - Welcome to SupLex City So maybe I'll introduce myself like Mr. Kennedy (Kennedy), the mic rope's bait Chris Benoit, I have to put my neck on the line just to pull my own weight But I ain't listening to all that Gobbledygook like Pete Rose in hiding I'm like an Earthquake with a Typhoon... Dragon Steamboats behind me” Brock with this/metropolis and then tying in the suplex city was nice, keep writing fam