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Old 11-22-2020, 01:30 PM   #10
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Hmmm. Two of the better on here; I mean it as a compliment that I expected a little more. On any given day, I could see either of you beating anyone. It just seemed like you each dialed it in a little bit. Still, both verses were solid.. User’s traditional humor and Jayson’s wording.

I liked User’s extended attack on Culture’s fake kids personal... but I wasn’t a huge fan of his opening 4... Jayson’s verse was well worded, but he had some stale ideas that I wouldn’t have expected. Gunbars don’t work for me unless they’re really well done and I’ve seen trust fall fat jokes and plays on “Username” numerous times. If you’re gonna attack User’s weight, you really gotta come clever, and I thought the health/fat jokes weren’t next level enough.

Overall, this was really close. I think User barely edged it out. Cheers.
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