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11-06-2020, 05:11 PM
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Shredder had some concepts if fleshed out abit better could of landed with some force. Nothing really stood out as his wording did him in. For eyes logo was decent
Eviction had a much better worded verse which read a little smoother and thus dem punches landed a bit cleaner. I was feeling the mcrib line. Vote eviction for a cleaner verse |
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