WEEK 2: Orc 0-0 VS Jaysonfresh 0-0 ORC WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-09-2020, 01:46 PM

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Orc · 10-09-2020, 02:41 PM

Wagwan bro

UPN Zuch · 10-12-2020, 10:19 AM

@Orc I have JFresh 16

Orc · 10-13-2020, 01:17 PM

All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me
We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free
Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again
Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst
I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse
I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig
&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”
Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well
If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell
Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top
You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop
&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason

.

UPN Zuch · 10-13-2020, 01:42 PM

JaysonFresh verse:

Yo.
Its Mr. Fresh..

vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws
Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls
scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers
pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger
referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.
Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn..
I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan.
shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too
Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u
plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits.
Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect
jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents
check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.

Universe · 10-13-2020, 02:23 PM

Orc:

All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me
We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free

- haha, good start.

Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again

- Clever and current, which is a bonus.

Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst
I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse

- Good poke.

I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig

- Meh.

&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”

- Loved this.

Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well
If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell

- Not a new concept but it was executed well enough.

Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top
You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop

- lol.

&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason

- Well written, but an iffy closer.

JaysonFresh:

Yo.
Its Mr. Fresh..

- Oh boy...

vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws
Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls

- Dumb, but made me chuckle.

nscrawny ass. run when my gun triggers
pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger

- Kind of cool.

referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.

- haha... :)

Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn..
I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan.

- Chink in ya armor is played af to me... but this was actually done well.

shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too
Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u

- Funny. But very... general.

plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits.

- Again, clever... but this is some stored in your notebook for a rainy day shit.

Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect
jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents

- Loved this. More of this please.

check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.

- Just seems very elementary to me. Schoolyard diss.

This was a good battle... Both are good writer's and displayed their wit. But I think J Fresh's verse was just too general for my liking. His punchlines could've applied to anyone; And although everybody has these types of lines, I felt Orc mixed and matched his a little better. His verse seem tailored to the opponent/league/current events, etc... J's seemed... thrown at the wall and see what sticks... If that makes sense. Very entertaining though.

Vote: Orc

Adverse · 10-13-2020, 03:57 PM

Dope battle

Orc had an awesome verse the only low points I really saw here were Argan oil and out of the mud which were just a cut below the other stuff you had here. It was a super consistent verse and landed some good punches

Jayson has jaw lock, one finger, private drill etc you had some bangers man but like Universe said it was all really general. A couple a verse are good but there was nothing here that attacked Orc personally. This was real Grindtime esque which isn’t bad but text battling is a different beast imo still good verse

Orc just hit different to me, that’s just an opinion I Can see a case for either or

V/Orc

evaD · 10-14-2020, 04:21 PM

All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me
We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free
Loll
Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again
Nice
Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst
I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse
Concept cool but it kinda misses as a personal
I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig
Lol I love this type of bar
&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”
Nice
Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well
If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell
Nice
Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top
You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop
It’s ok but blue did it better and I already read that
&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason
Dope

Its Mr. Fresh..

vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws
Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls
nice
scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers
pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger
It’s ok
referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.
Dope
Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn..
I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan.
Cool
shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too
Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u
Ok
plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits
Loll nice
Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect
jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents
Cool
check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.
Lmao nice

I got orc here with just slightly better overall verse. Good showing from both. Jayson got better as he went on for me but some concepts were a bit underwhelming

Vote - Orc

Ajax · 10-14-2020, 06:20 PM

This was another solid battle. Up there with Blue and Dave as the best of the week. I thought both were well written and concisely worded, with solid concepts. There were a few misses for me, but some really solid hits too. This was pretty much a tie for me, until I hit the second half of Jaysonfresh's verse.. The wedding registry line made me lol, and I dug the concepts of the next two "crawl" punches a lot (although I think they could have been executed a little bit better so you didn't use that word twice in succession). Orc was consistently solid, but I think Jayson barely took it. Could have gone either way though... and from a style perspective, I think both of these guys are two of the best I've seen on present-day NC. Good stuff.

Jaysonfresh wins by a hair.

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-14-2020, 11:43 PM

Nice battle here.

Orc super consistent. Got it out the mud had me dead.

Nigeria and drug mule were sick. Had more hits at the top end but I think the misses were a bit more of than Orcs. Good shit though.

On consistency,

Vote - orc

iSpaz · 10-15-2020, 11:24 AM

All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me
We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free
dopee
Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again
good
Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst
I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse
lol
I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig
tf lol
&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”
idk fam
Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well
If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell
argan oil ehhh
Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top
You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop
not bad
&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason
cool

Its Mr. Fresh..

vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws
Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls
not bad
scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers
pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger
didnt hit for me
referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.
cool
Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn..
I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan.
seen this plenty and havent battled for 5 yrs
shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too
Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u
nice
plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits
lol dead
Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect
jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents
cool
check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.
not bad

Overall i was feelin orc more in this one. Both came with good shit but orc was more consistent throughout.

UserName · 10-15-2020, 05:58 PM

Orc -

Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again
I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig
&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”
&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason

first off, my guy Orc LOVES ampersands. but yeah, this was a dope verse man. I havent seen Fresh's girl, dunno if thats actually a personal or just hilarious on the context alone - but it is what it is. Loved the avery bradley line for some reason as well too.

Fresh -

referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.
plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits
check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.

First time reading Fresh I think, I've seen his name around but I haven't actually dug in - you're dope man. I enjoyed the hell out of this verse, mud pits was hilarious.

Orc gets it with one more quotable here, this was up there as one of the best battles of the week to me though. Right up there with Blue and Dave.

V - Orc

Barcotic · 10-15-2020, 06:19 PM

Orc
Hideous body is good
Second wave is dope
Out the mud is ok
Well conditioned is ok

Jayson
Drill session is dope
Jaw locked up is dope
Kick game is dope

Damn, clooose asf.
I thought Jayson was soft until the latter half but then had some bangers
I'll be back to reread

Edit

So it came down to misses on my 2nd read, and Orc had some almosts while Jay had some air balls
Wanted to give it to Jayson via quotable quality but Orc had consistency an less bad misses

Orc gmv in the closest battle this wk.

Hush · 10-15-2020, 06:36 PM

Orc hit every bar

Except his last 2 punches the verse was great

That stop line was fire cuz Jayson biggest issue always been the jarring wording

My boy jayson is back !! Always been one of my favs and a slept on talent

Glad he’s getting the appropriate looks now

That drill session line was bonkers . Wedding reg was funny

But orc summer it up

The wording cost fresh at points sadly

V orc

Mac · 10-15-2020, 08:20 PM

All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me
We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free
not getting this

Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend
You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again
lool

Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst
I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse
lol

I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG
Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig
lmao

&&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen
Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again”
ok

Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well
If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell
lol

Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top
You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop
hah

&&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season
Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason
ehh

vs.

vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws
Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls
lol

scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers
pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger
not feeling this

referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong
get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong.
decent

Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn..
I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan.
not feelin this

shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too
Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u
lol

plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick?
I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits.
wow

Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect
jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents
ok

check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers
ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters.
ehh

nice battle guys. i had to re-read it twice because i had jayson fresh but tbh I felt orc verse was smoother.. this is a clash of styles which is dope but jayson had 1 more miss imo .. good stuff anyhow. v/ ork

Saint · 10-15-2020, 10:56 PM

Close battle

Orc -- Second Wave, Mud
Argan Oil, then closer

JF -- Crawl Vents, Registry
Mud pits then opener

Liked Jaysons concepts, but Orc wording made him the decider. Cool battle

V Orc

Wanderer · 10-16-2020, 01:26 AM

Orc

Solid verse
Hideous body cool
Second wave cool
Stumbling block ok
Avery Bradley cool

No haymakers but very consistent

Only reason I didn’t quote the pig line is cos I Prefer this from last NBL ;)
Wand
If ur pulling arms with the snub nose it’s cos ur girls a pig & u don’t wanna be seen

Fresh

Gender reveal party

Really wasn’t feeling much else in the same way everyone else was?

Vote Orc

JaysonFresh · 10-16-2020, 08:10 AM

You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again

sick.

always good seeing you mate.
nice verse.

UPN Zuch · 10-16-2020, 08:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JaysonFresh

You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again

sick.

always good seeing you mate.
nice verse.

Your first half was en fuego my guy

10-13-2020, 02:23 PM	#6
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 999 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178702	Orc: All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free - haha, good start. Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again - Clever and current, which is a bonus. Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse - Good poke. I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig - Meh. &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” - Loved this. Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell - Not a new concept but it was executed well enough. Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop - lol. &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason - Well written, but an iffy closer. JaysonFresh: Yo. Its Mr. Fresh.. - Oh boy... vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls - Dumb, but made me chuckle. nscrawny ass. run when my gun triggers pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger - Kind of cool. referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong. - haha... :) Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn.. I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan. - Chink in ya armor is played af to me... but this was actually done well. shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u - Funny. But very... general. plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick? I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits. - Again, clever... but this is some stored in your notebook for a rainy day shit. Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents - Loved this. More of this please. check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters. - Just seems very elementary to me. Schoolyard diss. This was a good battle... Both are good writer's and displayed their wit. But I think J Fresh's verse was just too general for my liking. His punchlines could've applied to anyone; And although everybody has these types of lines, I felt Orc mixed and matched his a little better. His verse seem tailored to the opponent/league/current events, etc... J's seemed... thrown at the wall and see what sticks... If that makes sense. Very entertaining though. Vote: Orc __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

10-14-2020, 04:21 PM	#8
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free Loll Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again Nice Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse Concept cool but it kinda misses as a personal I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig Lol I love this type of bar &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” Nice Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell Nice Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop It’s ok but blue did it better and I already read that &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason Dope Its Mr. Fresh.. vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls nice scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger It’s ok referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong. Dope Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn.. I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan. Cool shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u Ok plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick? I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits Loll nice Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents Cool check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters. Lmao nice I got orc here with just slightly better overall verse. Good showing from both. Jayson got better as he went on for me but some concepts were a bit underwhelming Vote - Orc __________________

10-14-2020, 06:20 PM	#9
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95147	This was another solid battle. Up there with Blue and Dave as the best of the week. I thought both were well written and concisely worded, with solid concepts. There were a few misses for me, but some really solid hits too. This was pretty much a tie for me, until I hit the second half of Jaysonfresh's verse.. The wedding registry line made me lol, and I dug the concepts of the next two "crawl" punches a lot (although I think they could have been executed a little bit better so you didn't use that word twice in succession). Orc was consistently solid, but I think Jayson barely took it. Could have gone either way though... and from a style perspective, I think both of these guys are two of the best I've seen on present-day NC. Good stuff. Jaysonfresh wins by a hair. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-14-2020, 11:43 PM	#10
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132751	Nice battle here. Orc super consistent. Got it out the mud had me dead. Nigeria and drug mule were sick. Had more hits at the top end but I think the misses were a bit more of than Orcs. Good shit though. On consistency, Vote - orc __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-15-2020, 11:24 AM	#11
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free dopee Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again good Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse lol I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig tf lol &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” idk fam Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell argan oil ehhh Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop not bad &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason cool Its Mr. Fresh.. vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls not bad scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger didnt hit for me referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong. cool Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn.. I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan. seen this plenty and havent battled for 5 yrs shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u nice plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick? I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits lol dead Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents cool check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters. not bad Overall i was feelin orc more in this one. Both came with good shit but orc was more consistent throughout. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-09-2020, 02:41 PM	#2
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Wagwan bro

10-13-2020, 01:17 PM	#4
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason .

10-13-2020, 03:57 PM	#7
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,747 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	Dope battle Orc had an awesome verse the only low points I really saw here were Argan oil and out of the mud which were just a cut below the other stuff you had here. It was a super consistent verse and landed some good punches Jayson has jaw lock, one finger, private drill etc you had some bangers man but like Universe said it was all really general. A couple a verse are good but there was nothing here that attacked Orc personally. This was real Grindtime esque which isn’t bad but text battling is a different beast imo still good verse Orc just hit different to me, that’s just an opinion I Can see a case for either or V/Orc

10-15-2020, 05:58 PM	#12
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	Orc - Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason first off, my guy Orc LOVES ampersands. but yeah, this was a dope verse man. I havent seen Fresh's girl, dunno if thats actually a personal or just hilarious on the context alone - but it is what it is. Loved the avery bradley line for some reason as well too. Fresh - referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong. plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick? I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters. First time reading Fresh I think, I've seen his name around but I haven't actually dug in - you're dope man. I enjoyed the hell out of this verse, mud pits was hilarious. Orc gets it with one more quotable here, this was up there as one of the best battles of the week to me though. Right up there with Blue and Dave. V - Orc __________________ First Class

10-15-2020, 06:19 PM	#13
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,494 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061966	Orc Hideous body is good Second wave is dope Out the mud is ok Well conditioned is ok Jayson Drill session is dope Jaw locked up is dope Kick game is dope Damn, clooose asf. I thought Jayson was soft until the latter half but then had some bangers I'll be back to reread Edit So it came down to misses on my 2nd read, and Orc had some almosts while Jay had some air balls Wanted to give it to Jayson via quotable quality but Orc had consistency an less bad misses Orc gmv in the closest battle this wk. __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open Last edited by Barcotic; 10-16-2020 at 06:59 AM.

10-15-2020, 06:36 PM	#14
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Orc hit every bar Except his last 2 punches the verse was great That stop line was fire cuz Jayson biggest issue always been the jarring wording My boy jayson is back !! Always been one of my favs and a slept on talent Glad he’s getting the appropriate looks now That drill session line was bonkers . Wedding reg was funny But orc summer it up The wording cost fresh at points sadly V orc __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

10-15-2020, 08:20 PM	#15
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856619	All the sneak disses. U really justa coward to me We boutta see a Hideous Body, it’ll make Barcotic feel empowered & free not getting this Brooo if u say Hi to a bitch?! She pretends to phone a friend You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again lool Remember u asked for tips?! Your flow is the worst I told you “always be Punctual”. I didn’t say put Full Stops all over ya verse lol I came up from nothing. My love life is BIG Dogg. We only say YOU ‘Got it out the Mud’ cuz ya girl looks like a Pig lmao &&They sayn J’s tricky but he ain’t ever honed his pen Trustttt. 1hit will turn this Stumbling Block to a “Never Walks Home Again” ok Orc is 1% body fat; I just happen to type as well If u’re coming thru Well-Conditioned. That Argan Oil got u feeling fly as hell lol Consistency fails you & you’ll never reach the very top You got a style like Aero. Best believe there’s something Ass in every drop hah &&&Ya wife been on the squa for the whooole season Shaming ya badly; Avery Bradley. U gave that bitch a Ring for no reason ehh vs. vs the guy who took Butlers style n gave it serious flaws Ima clear this imposta out quicka than his bank account when Prince of Nigeria calls lol scrawny ass. run when my gun triggers pushin u ova's like drug mules in airport stalls .. force u out with one finger not feeling this referee stoppage first round nigga no opening dong get popped before the count like gender reveal party gone wrong. decent Who da’ real pussy? when my tool’s drawn.. I’ll put a chink in ya armor to expose the bitch inside like gottam Mulan. not feelin this shiiit one look atcha no wonder fiancee aint sober too Yalls wedding registry included a paper bag to put over u lol plus she call me ova like yoo Jay wanna fuck quick? I give her 'privates the kinda drill session' that make her pussy army crawl thru mud pits. wow Ur dunzo. one punch, ya mouth n chest wall connect jaw locked up soooo long doggg its plottin prison escape thru crawl vents ok check it I pick up chicks that belong on magazine covers ya u kick game too. Mad when ya bf stood u up at dave & busters. ehh nice battle guys. i had to re-read it twice because i had jayson fresh but tbh I felt orc verse was smoother.. this is a clash of styles which is dope but jayson had 1 more miss imo .. good stuff anyhow. v/ ork

10-15-2020, 10:56 PM	#16
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,227 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Close battle Orc -- Second Wave, Mud Argan Oil, then closer JF -- Crawl Vents, Registry Mud pits then opener Liked Jaysons concepts, but Orc wording made him the decider. Cool battle V Orc

10-16-2020, 01:26 AM	#17
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	Orc Solid verse Hideous body cool Second wave cool Stumbling block ok Avery Bradley cool No haymakers but very consistent Only reason I didn’t quote the pig line is cos I Prefer this from last NBL ;) Wand If ur pulling arms with the snub nose it’s cos ur girls a pig & u don’t wanna be seen Fresh Gender reveal party Really wasn’t feeling much else in the same way everyone else was? Vote Orc

10-16-2020, 08:10 AM	#18
JaysonFresh Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 45 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 263272	You ain’t seeing noo Second Wave.. it got Scientists starting to hope again sick. always good seeing you mate. nice verse.