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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
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Spaz had some super general stuff in here, like the wine bottle line. But I did like the opener and I also liked the drum roll bar. Those were standouts deadly sin could have been executed better but a good idea overall a decent inaugural verse welcome to the league
Sinacog what’s to be said? Classic Sinacog. No punches no personals just blasphemous claims. Only this time there’s a twist NONE OF IT RHYMED. Awful as usual but you don’t heed advice so carry on V/Spaz |
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