WEEK 2: ispaz 0-0 VS Sinacog 0-0 ISPAZ WINS
 

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goin 10

Fuck it, I'll drop..

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.
You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits.
If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips.
You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho.
So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano.
Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit.
So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice.
More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle.
I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle.

Clockwork orange; round of applause because I'm w(r)rapped in the gauze/
I am God; I killed the prophets of the Bible with a idle/idol bible/
I caught ruins in ancient Egypt; meaning I saw locusts swarming
Soaked in gauze/god because I am God; I am Jesus Christ; sea the light
I am the biblical plague; you are all death; like dead
Because I am what's left; I am a plague; I am bubonic plague
I am the night/knight in shinning armor; battling karma
I am the armor of God; the karma of god
I am what's left; the order of the serpent
I am the serpentine; the bursting of screams from a herde of gleam

Spaz had some super general stuff in here, like the wine bottle line. But I did like the opener and I also liked the drum roll bar. Those were standouts deadly sin could have been executed better but a good idea overall a decent inaugural verse welcome to the league

Sinacog what’s to be said? Classic Sinacog. No punches no personals just blasphemous claims. Only this time there’s a twist NONE OF IT RHYMED. Awful as usual but you don’t heed advice so carry on

V/Spaz

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.
cool

You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits.
If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips.
i didn't get this tbh

You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho.
So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano.
neither this

Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit.
So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice.
okk

More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle.
I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle.
okk

vs.

nothing

someone kickc sinacog out of the league.. ez wins for whoever that matches him

good showing ispaz you didnt really need much

v/ispaz

Ispaz gets this


Cool verse. Not gonna break this down because I didn’t feel anything from Sinacog.


Vote - ispaz

Deadly Sin & Sin City the only decent concepts I took from this batt. tbph
And even they missed bc of the rout taken, IMO.

Still

Spaz gmv

Sin trolls opponents, trolls voting an trolls disc.
I really don't kno why he's allowed to participate. Shit makes zero sense

I’ve got nothing to say to Sinacog. I genuinely might ban him later.

iSpaz was cool, he didn’t have to try. I don’t know who it is but he seems like he has the basics down and could be decent if he put forth some effort and used some fresher concepts.

Ispaz

Sin city was interesting
Drum roll was ok

Everything else fell short. Potential here though

Sinacog

Nada.

Vote iSpaz

Sinacog pure dogshit in here man


Ispaz had some good wording


Vote spaz

Why every sinacog verse read like a rant from that Nigga in “ Red Dragon”

Yeah, the fact that Sin is even allowed into leagues is a bit ridiculous at this point. Just handed iSpaz a W and 5 points on a silver platter... and I'm over here battling Barc and Wand lol. The fuck.

Level of competition should be taken into account when awarding points, etc. How this would work? Who knows... But this was a straight gimme.

iSpaz is good though. Great flow and some decent concepts.

Vote - iSpaz

I'm not sure there's much need to critique here. Sin is obviously either a troll account or a very confused 13 year old Thai boy with access to way too much anime who speaks English as a fourth language.

So, its pretty clear that iSpaz won. I dug the internal rhyme schemes and the short, to the point, wording... I think it could have used some more wit/originality in the concepts (and I still think that having a whole verse of gun punches doesn't work well unless they are REALLY well executed), but it was a pretty entertaining little verse. So, cheers.

iSpaz wins.

Spaz had bars but beyond that, Sinacog didn’t have one reference to what type of dragon he was not one. As such, I was unsure how to really read into his battle verse to see where he was coming from. Was he a dark dragon, a black dragon, a dream dragon, I don’t know. Spaz had sin city, the drum and even a Mac will spit reference in there, which honestly, with me, is going to go a long way.

Anyway, vote spaz

Spaz you had some decent stuff here. Could definitely win some battles in this league.

Sinacog is a no.

Vote Spaz

Drum roll was the highlight from me other than the Mac spit reference. Didn’t get the deadly sins bar though? Cool verse

Vote - spaz

spaz -

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.

Didn't need much. This was cool. Drum line was okay as well.

Sin -

nope.

V - Spaz

Vote-Spaz
reason
Spaz came harder with his bars compare to Sin
Sin didn't have bars make me go wow

Spaz got this the other dude is a pure asshole