because we're living too long

Adverse · 07-16-2020, 02:18 AM

I don't even know how to describe what I read it wasn't really like reading a hip hop verse, though the flow was excellent it was just like an experience. Imagery and vocabulary were out of this world. And I like how layered this was how it was so braggadocious at points at first sight but then there was so much more to it from the northwest bar onwards. Really loved the closer too had that vintage hip hop feel was really definitive and thought provoking you're one of the best for a reason. Props bro

Universe · 07-16-2020, 06:47 AM

Anyone else inspired? I know I am...

This is THE guy when it comes to imagery and flow... no one touches him.

Great read, dead man. Thank you.

07-16-2020, 06:47 AM	#2
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Anyone else inspired? I know I am... This is THE guy when it comes to imagery and flow... no one touches him. Great read, dead man. Thank you. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

07-16-2020, 02:18 AM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I don't even know how to describe what I read it wasn't really like reading a hip hop verse, though the flow was excellent it was just like an experience. Imagery and vocabulary were out of this world. And I like how layered this was how it was so braggadocious at points at first sight but then there was so much more to it from the northwest bar onwards. Really loved the closer too had that vintage hip hop feel was really definitive and thought provoking you're one of the best for a reason. Props bro