PIC SPOTLIGHT: Mac vs. Adverse

Artifice · 06-23-2020, 12:22 PM

enjoyed the read, but Adverse got this easy.

Mac you had a couple of concepts that could've worked better, the opener had potential imo as well as the red dead redemption line... the rest I wasn't feeling tbh. Not sure how new you are to this, but just keep at it, as long as you take the constructive feed people drop, and keep reading battles and writing bro.

Ad you're opener was dope, i don't even really like football but even I caught the reference, shells/entrees I dug and thought you finished strong with speedy gonzalez and the closer. Lenses was cool but didn't hit super hard.

Thanks for doing the spotlight gents.

v/ Adverse

06-23-2020, 12:22 PM	#8
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944949	enjoyed the read, but Adverse got this easy. Mac you had a couple of concepts that could've worked better, the opener had potential imo as well as the red dead redemption line... the rest I wasn't feeling tbh. Not sure how new you are to this, but just keep at it, as long as you take the constructive feed people drop, and keep reading battles and writing bro. Ad you're opener was dope, i don't even really like football but even I caught the reference, shells/entrees I dug and thought you finished strong with speedy gonzalez and the closer. Lenses was cool but didn't hit super hard. Thanks for doing the spotlight gents. v/ Adverse