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06-16-2013, 04:07 PM	#2
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	pretty dope...felt the emotion. flow was effortless, i think i MAYBE caught 1 hiccup... literary device was i like ur word correlation helium/frog in throat that type of sht but this was more a vent i feel, bc what i take away is more emotion than anything else... glad u got it off ur chest... keep writing.

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