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Old 05-22-2020, 09:30 AM   #7
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You gettin a busted lip as a souvenir.. aint no one got respect for this faggot..
i’ma make u take back whateva u State.. shhh, u might as well be a refrigerator magnet.

creative idea, wasn't really feeling the execution on this though

Cuz what this hobo brings will barely make a thud or a bang..
ur such a Fake Bum here’s a plan.. make a Go Fund Me page & run up a scam.

this one is a miss for me

u cant fuck w/ me man.. next move- home invasion, i’m askin for papes..
think social worker visiting mrs doubtfire.. when i fuckin mask up, its cake.

I saw someone mention this line in another thread and half expected it to be some played doubtfire wp but this was a creative angle. I don't really like the "think....(fill in the set-up here)" type wording but the rest of this is dope

this is murder 1.. son ur rhymes are in trouble..
Crime scene, yellow tape.. mahfucka ur verse is a clear sign of a struggle.

funny and clever, I dig it

oh u thought i was hungry before? now my eyes as big as an ocean..
i’m building up an appetite, dog.. and u in the kennel with Ramsay Bolton.

eh this is alright

I’m a legend. My big ass Ego allows me to write from the fire within..
once I saw the ID missin from Dave.. we dont need Freud to see he has no desire to win.

wasnt really feeling this, and "ID" from a psychology perspective is pronounced much differently than the I.D. abbreviation

i’m double pneumonia Covid.. you just a cold or a cough..
maann you barely a bogey in my radar.. to you i’m blue bayou’s scorecard in golf.

nah boogey/bogey is a bit of a stretch and the whole sickness analogy isn't my cup of tea

When u see the desi book.. the king got steady aim, u already shook..
i shoot at any rook.. now u got Arms across ur chest, Res just gave you a preppy look.

decent closer




This lonely loser hasn’t heard “Hi Res” with any enthusiasm
Since he took his Fuji cam back to the shop to swap for a newer Canon

this punch is too drawn out over 2 lines and the wording can be more aggressive

It’s cute you’re back and writing, can’t stay too long on the shelf
Cus Resin’s a Generational Talent the way he keep sonning himself

Nah, i've seen too many sonning yourself type bars. This is slightly different, but not enough to make this work.

I’ve come here from hell with hundreds of tales, not only murder one
So when I say you gon’ take this L, kook-we ain’t talking Tony Ferguson

Nah

n I’ve heard you were on the old boards, so respect to Jeff, I won’t front
But the only R.M-I-C now is just this washed up old cunt

eh this is okay, these type of initial punches rarely work out in my experience

Yo I don’t want to have this old Bitch put down but it’s surely for the best
Even if the consistency of his droppings will never really worry the Vets

lol this is kinda dumb but it's funny

I’ve learnt from the best so I’ll easily merk y’all’s hero unless he works harder
And make his mag chart feature more vertical Zeros than Pearl Harbour

This is a dope idea, I think it couldve been executed better

The style that I write’s going viral on this site. You gonna regret this match
When I expose this Repetitive Hack somethin’ like a DDoS attack

ok, I've seen the general idea done before

Talkin berettas and macks like it’s Saul genuine fact? you’ve never had a gun
But if you step to me in my Homeland? What you Carrie won’t even Matheson

ok, not really digging the execution



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u cant fuck w/ me man.. next move- home invasion, i’m askin for papes..
think social worker visiting mrs doubtfire.. when i fuckin mask up, its cake.
this is murder 1.. son ur rhymes are in trouble..
Crime scene, yellow tape.. mahfucka ur verse is a clear sign of a struggle.

vs

I’ve learnt from the best so I’ll easily merk y’all’s hero unless he works harder
And make his mag chart feature more vertical Zeros than Pearl Harbour

consistency was decent, too just a little weird


overall I feel like resin's wording and execution was a bit more polished which resulted in his bars hitting harder. solid battle from both sides

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