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Old 05-24-2020, 11:37 AM   #1
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Resin MIC

You gettin a busted lip as a souvenir.. aint no one got respect for this faggot..
i’ma make u take back whateva u State.. shhh, u might as well be a refrigerator magnet.
Not feelin the ending
Cuz what this hobo brings will barely make a thud or a bang..
ur such a Fake Bum here’s a plan.. make a Go Fund Me page & run up a scam.
Bang/scam don't rhyme. Bland punch
u cant fuck w/ me man.. next move- home invasion, i’m askin for papes..
think social worker visiting mrs doubtfire.. when i fuckin mask up, its cake.
Not a diss
this is murder 1.. son ur rhymes are in trouble..
Crime scene, yellow tape.. mahfucka ur verse is a clear sign of a struggle.
Filler
oh u thought i was hungry before? now my eyes as big as an ocean..
i’m building up an appetite, dog.. and u in the kennel with Ramsay Bolton.
Filler/Not a diss
I’m a legend. My big ass Ego allows me to write from the fire within..
once I saw the ID missin from Dave.. we dont need Freud to see he has no desire to win.
Ehhhh I see what you were trying to do, but...
i’m double pneumonia Covid.. you just a cold or a cough..
maann you barely a bogey in my radar.. to you i’m blue bayou’s scorecard in golf.
i was with it until the ending, missed the diss
When u see the desi book.. the king got steady aim, u already shook..
i shoot at any rook.. now u got Arms across ur chest, Res just gave you a preppy look.
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Flow is straight, wording is hit or miss. Concepts are mostly bland. This verse would be better for audio.

3/10




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This lonely loser hasn’t heard “Hi Res” with any enthusiasm
Since he took his Fuji cam back to the shop to swap for a newer Canon
Above avg filler
It’s cute you’re back and writing, can’t stay too long on the shelf
Cus Resin’s a Generational Talent the way he keep sonning himself
Good
I’ve come here from hell with hundreds of tales, not only murder one
So when I say you gon’ take this L, kook-we ain’t talking Tony Ferguson
I don't like "____ and I ain't talking ____" bars
n I’ve heard you were on the old boards, so respect to Jeff, I won’t front
But the only R.M-I-C now is just this washed up old cunt
Could've went harder than how this ended
Yo I don’t want to have this old Bitch put down but it’s surely for the best
Even if the consistency of his droppings will never really worry the Vets
Ok
I’ve learnt from the best so I’ll easily merk y’all’s hero unless he works harder
And make his mag chart feature more vertical Zeros than Pearl Harbour
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Not much of a diss
The style that I write’s going viral on this site. You gonna regret this match
When I expose this Repetitive Hack somethin’ like a DDoS attack
Same ^
Talkin berettas and macks like it’s Saul genuine fact? you’ve never had a gun
But if you step to me in my Homeland? What you Carrie won’t even Matheson
"Math - Uh - Son" is how it's pronounced. Not sure what you were going for there, but good wp throughout.


First half of the verse was slightly better than the second half, some good concepts in there.

6/10





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Old 05-25-2020, 02:21 AM   #2
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Talkin berettas and macks like it’s Saul genuine fact? you’ve never had a gun
But if you step to me in my Homeland? What you Carrie won’t even Matheson
"Math - Uh - Son" is how it's pronounced. Not sure what you were going for there, but good wp throughout.

Yeah ‘What you carry won’t matter son’ didn’t think it was that much of a stretch tbh? Thanks tho
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