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Old 05-16-2020, 01:16 PM   #1
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I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck..
Ok. 'your'
I'm the possum dutch; I'm the infinity gem; the swifting kick
I'm the nifty kid; you're not sweet; you're the opposite of Eminem/M&M
Dont explain shit.
I'm the positive marker; the awesome touch; the blossom flower
I'm the impossible hour; one punch will turn 'beautiful to ugly' like the pollen's sour..
Calling yourself the blossom flower isn't good
I'm the infinite marker; the maker of heaven and hell; Satan is hailed
I'm the ascension of hell/hail; 'you're scared' like the dimension of hell/hail
Wtf nah
I'm the ascension of flower; the ascension of angels and devils
I'm the halo of heaven; I'm a parable; you're a fable of heaven..
Nah

The gimmick would be better if, instead of writing nonsense, you treated it like a topical battle, or otherwise thought outside the box.

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Plot
Gawd, gotta write words for this herb? someone cut me a break...
Battling the piece of shits less inspiring than roasting Kungs ugly face.
Filler
Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position.
ok
And its a joke your a christian, writing all them pieces about dragons..
I'll smash this faggot with the left cross that jesus was dragging.
meh
Need to apologize for your crap kid, just stop and quit the rap shit..
Synergy? Nah his names just become synonymous for wackness.
Filler
Fuck it Im going back to netflix, battle cog? Rather see the dentist..
And this TOTAL FLAKE just got fucking eaten for breakfast.
Filler

3/10

Meh but the two verses are incomparable. Plot wins by default.
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Old 05-16-2020, 04:26 PM   #2
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Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position

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I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck


Plot the clear winner here but surprised a little by sinacogs verse. An improvement from last week for sure no repetitive bullshit filler that's annoying to see. But still isn't quite getting it more punches and no explaining the bar at the end, should be worded and concepted good enough it doesnt need an explanation. Vote - Plot
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