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Blue Bayou 05-11-2020 05:50 PM

Week 6: Plot (0-2) vs. Sinacog (0-4) - PLOT WINS
 
NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance

Line Limit:
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• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:
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• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
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• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


@Plot

@Sinacog

Sinacog 05-12-2020 10:42 AM

I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck..
I'm the possum dutch; I'm the infinity gem; the swifting kick
I'm the nifty kid; you're not sweet; you're the opposite of Eminem/M&M
I'm the positive marker; the awesome touch; the blossom flower
I'm the impossible hour; one punch will turn 'beautiful to ugly' like the pollen's sour..
I'm the infinite marker; the maker of heaven and hell; Satan is hailed
I'm the ascension of hell/hail; 'you're scared' like the dimension of hell/hail
I'm the ascension of flower; the ascension of angels and devils
I'm the halo of heaven; I'm a parable; you're a fable of heaven..

Plot 05-15-2020 12:37 PM

extension

UPN Zuch 05-15-2020 01:18 PM

What fuckin year is it

Blue Bayou 05-15-2020 01:36 PM

@Plot are you going to post a verse?

Plot 05-15-2020 10:31 PM

Gawd, gotta write words for this herb? someone cut me a break...
Battling the piece of shits less inspiring than roasting Kungs ugly face.
Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position.
And its a joke your a christian, writing all them pieces about dragons..
I'll smash this faggot with the left cross that jesus was dragging.
Need to apologize for your crap kid, just stop and quit the rap shit..
Synergy? Nah his names just become synonymous for wackness.
Fuck it Im going back to netflix, battle cog? Rather see the dentist..
And this TOTAL FLAKE just got fucking eaten for breakfast.

Coop 05-16-2020 01:16 PM

Sinacog

I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck..
Ok. 'your'
I'm the possum dutch; I'm the infinity gem; the swifting kick
I'm the nifty kid; you're not sweet; you're the opposite of Eminem/M&M
Dont explain shit.
I'm the positive marker; the awesome touch; the blossom flower
I'm the impossible hour; one punch will turn 'beautiful to ugly' like the pollen's sour..
Calling yourself the blossom flower isn't good
I'm the infinite marker; the maker of heaven and hell; Satan is hailed
I'm the ascension of hell/hail; 'you're scared' like the dimension of hell/hail
Wtf nah
I'm the ascension of flower; the ascension of angels and devils
I'm the halo of heaven; I'm a parable; you're a fable of heaven..
Nah

The gimmick would be better if, instead of writing nonsense, you treated it like a topical battle, or otherwise thought outside the box.

1/10



VS


Plot
Gawd, gotta write words for this herb? someone cut me a break...
Battling the piece of shits less inspiring than roasting Kungs ugly face.
Filler
Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position.
ok
And its a joke your a christian, writing all them pieces about dragons..
I'll smash this faggot with the left cross that jesus was dragging.
meh
Need to apologize for your crap kid, just stop and quit the rap shit..
Synergy? Nah his names just become synonymous for wackness.
Filler
Fuck it Im going back to netflix, battle cog? Rather see the dentist..
And this TOTAL FLAKE just got fucking eaten for breakfast.
Filler

3/10

Meh but the two verses are incomparable. Plot wins by default.

Incredible 05-16-2020 04:26 PM

Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position

Vs

I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck


Plot the clear winner here but surprised a little by sinacogs verse. An improvement from last week for sure no repetitive bullshit filler that's annoying to see. But still isn't quite getting it more punches and no explaining the bar at the end, should be worded and concepted good enough it doesnt need an explanation. Vote - Plot

Answer 05-16-2020 04:33 PM

I'm yellow in the cosmos; burn you to cosmic dust; solemn thrust
I'm the awesome one; you're like a 'rushed movie' you're plot will suck..

Still a better punch than anything ive seen from you the last few weeks

I'm the possum dutch; I'm the infinity gem; the swifting kick
I'm the nifty kid; you're not sweet; you're the opposite of Eminem/M&M

lol

I'm the positive marker; the awesome touch; the blossom flower
I'm the impossible hour; one punch will turn 'beautiful to ugly' like the pollen's sour..

Nah

I'm the infinite marker; the maker of heaven and hell; Satan is hailed
I'm the ascension of hell/hail; 'you're scared' like the dimension of hell/hail

Nah too religious and weird

I'm the ascension of flower; the ascension of angels and devils
I'm the halo of heaven; I'm a parable; you're a fable of heaven..

Nah too religious and weird





Gawd, gotta write words for this herb? someone cut me a break...
Battling the piece of shits less inspiring than roasting Kungs ugly face.

Nah not really feeling this, a bit simplistic and it's more of a diss to kung than your opponent

Some people just never improve, and Cogs just hopeless at spittin..
You just keep going downward dog, like your stuck in that yoga position..

I've seen this idea done a few times

And its a joke your a christian, writing all them pieces about dragons..
I'll smash this faggot with the left cross that jesus was dragging.

Again, I've seen similar concepts done and the spin on this could be more unique but this is decent

Need to apologize for your crap kid, just stop and quit the rap shit..
Synergy? Nah his names just become synonymous for wackness.

Nah wasn't feeling this one

Fuck it Im going back to netflix, battle cog? Rather see the dentist..
And this TOTAL FLAKE just got fucking eaten for breakfast.

lol this made me laugh for some reason but you could've executed the angle in a more direct way


overall mvgt plot. You'll get em next time AJ

FGR 05-16-2020 05:34 PM

Sins opener

Vs

Jesus and yoga

Nothing hard from plot but enough for the win... Sin came the best I've seen him..but still terrible... I like that it looks like you're starting to form where to punch though

V plot

Ryno 05-17-2020 10:11 AM

Plot had the better attacks. Concepts weren’t the hottest but
Vs Sin u don’t need much. Downward dog would be the biggest
Stand out. Everything else was boarder line eh. Sins trolling.

V/Plot

Bomb Bard 05-17-2020 10:17 AM

Plot seemed like he rushed this verse. He had more disses tho. Sin had a played concept with the plot movie angle but that’s it


V/plot

Blue Bayou 05-17-2020 03:46 PM

Plot wins


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