Week 6: Slect (1-4) vs. Mac (0-0) - SLECT WINS

Coop · 05-14-2020, 09:58 AM

Mac

@slecht no hard feelings but...

..it looks like a 2020 agenda has been used more than you
so much time alone your dick is already screaming safe words
Doesn't rhyme, wtf
not something unheard of, and surely nothing to cheer
the closest you'll get to 69 is a sex felony and a ruined career
Bit basic but ok
n will do this brief, leave you dreaming with fairies
beat, roasted like an argentinian beef and gasping for Buenos aires
Unless i'm missing some buenos aires wp this is basic
no offense, i'm shaped like by da vinci and therent many other
you look like a skunk fucked a mad cow and gave birth to your mother..
Elementary diss on many levels
..but chill lil' Grasshopper, u gonna hop places like Forrest
prolly just like ur parent.. that hybrid woman jumps entire forests
Ehh. Jumping ≠ fucking
i know its getting repetitive.. this is the last in the archive
just..
your mother has been thru so many bytes she could fill a hard drive
3 in a row? You could tell it is repetitive... a definite sign to switch up the concepts. Probably the best one of the 3, but lessened impact because it was the last of the 3
so, don't go around pulling strings last week win wasnt ur decision
broke ya 4 loses streak with a troll that met God Thesaurus in a vision
Commas and spell check would do you some good. Also this is dissing who he beat more than him. Weak diss.
bitch you suck giant donkey balls.. try to stay away from the screen
if slecht's ever on fire droppin heat, it involves 103 °F and quarantine
Lazy-ish

A non-rhyming opener made me not want to read the rest. 3 yo momma jokes in a row killed any momentum. I will say, you do a good job of tying your set ups to your punches, and the verse as a whole flows. Your best bar was probably bytes, if the set up was better. (I'm assuming its a fat joke)

I'd give this a 5/10

VS

slecht

Idiot loser with shitty humor, got no smoke like a shitty hookah
I am a killer, on the fly ..crack ya skull - no Jimmy Snuka
Good flow, but not a fan of the way this ends. More of a rap bar than a rap battle bar
A beginner won't ever champ this league. It's simple - get the picture.
If u say u the peoples champ? that'll have rock n rollin over his grave, no Little Richard
Same here.
I gave ya bitch 5 bucks to come over & perform fellatio. That broad is crazy.
She'll doing anything for the bucs this year, that's Gronk & Brady.
More of a statement than a creative diss
I'll had bitch on my dick,...hair back & forth, like Willow boppin'
Then I choke her with what she sleeping on: call it pillow talking.
Not really dissin him.
many reasons I state that...You're not a battler with great raps, u straight trash
that flavor just ain't cutting it, I'm checking u off the list like Craig, Mac.
"Im checking you off the list" just isn't strong
I don't care if you decline, I'll force you to say I'm the greatest of all time
with a knife, I'll carve mac on ya forehead till u make up your mind.
Cool, rewording/a better twist on make up ya mind, this woulda been fire
No, Kid. Hungry MC's like me don't want e-thugs like you in this location,
u a rat, 'n I ain't taking your shit,...I'm the charity refusing 6ix9ines donation
Ehhh
U awful at this, fam. Fake as fuck like those who do it all for the gram.
Make you look foolish, mac...when I pull the piece: Monopoly scam.
Tying in monopoly somehow in your setup would've made this better. The fact one can replace 'monopoly 'with other board games shows that it wasn't creative enough.

This verse would be better for an audio battle or a freestyle.

The bars like:

"...................
......., no _____"

don't belong in a text battle. They can be creative, but unless done perfectly, lack sting.

Speaking of lacking sting..... when you boil it down, and look at just your punchlines, only 2/8 even diss him directly. That needs to be 8/8.

This a 4/10.

Vote: Mac

05-14-2020, 09:58 AM	#7
Coop Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 352 Battle Record: 3-6 Rep Power: 1313635	Mac @slecht no hard feelings but... ..it looks like a 2020 agenda has been used more than you so much time alone your dick is already screaming safe words Doesn't rhyme, wtf not something unheard of, and surely nothing to cheer the closest you'll get to 69 is a sex felony and a ruined career Bit basic but ok n will do this brief, leave you dreaming with fairies beat, roasted like an argentinian beef and gasping for Buenos aires Unless i'm missing some buenos aires wp this is basic no offense, i'm shaped like by da vinci and therent many other you look like a skunk fucked a mad cow and gave birth to your mother.. Elementary diss on many levels ..but chill lil' Grasshopper, u gonna hop places like Forrest prolly just like ur parent.. that hybrid woman jumps entire forests Ehh. Jumping ≠ fucking i know its getting repetitive.. this is the last in the archive just.. your mother has been thru so many bytes she could fill a hard drive 3 in a row? You could tell it is repetitive... a definite sign to switch up the concepts. Probably the best one of the 3, but lessened impact because it was the last of the 3 so, don't go around pulling strings last week win wasnt ur decision broke ya 4 loses streak with a troll that met God Thesaurus in a vision Commas and spell check would do you some good. Also this is dissing who he beat more than him. Weak diss. bitch you suck giant donkey balls.. try to stay away from the screen if slecht's ever on fire droppin heat, it involves 103 °F and quarantine Lazy-ish A non-rhyming opener made me not want to read the rest. 3 yo momma jokes in a row killed any momentum. I will say, you do a good job of tying your set ups to your punches, and the verse as a whole flows. Your best bar was probably bytes, if the set up was better. (I'm assuming its a fat joke) I'd give this a 5/10 VS slecht Idiot loser with shitty humor, got no smoke like a shitty hookah I am a killer, on the fly ..crack ya skull - no Jimmy Snuka Good flow, but not a fan of the way this ends. More of a rap bar than a rap battle bar A beginner won't ever champ this league. It's simple - get the picture. If u say u the peoples champ? that'll have rock n rollin over his grave, no Little Richard Same here. I gave ya bitch 5 bucks to come over & perform fellatio. That broad is crazy. She'll doing anything for the bucs this year, that's Gronk & Brady. More of a statement than a creative diss I'll had bitch on my dick,...hair back & forth, like Willow boppin' Then I choke her with what she sleeping on: call it pillow talking. Not really dissin him. many reasons I state that...You're not a battler with great raps, u straight trash that flavor just ain't cutting it, I'm checking u off the list like Craig, Mac. "Im checking you off the list" just isn't strong I don't care if you decline, I'll force you to say I'm the greatest of all time with a knife, I'll carve mac on ya forehead till u make up your mind. Cool, rewording/a better twist on make up ya mind, this woulda been fire No, Kid. Hungry MC's like me don't want e-thugs like you in this location, u a rat, 'n I ain't taking your shit,...I'm the charity refusing 6ix9ines donation Ehhh U awful at this, fam. Fake as fuck like those who do it all for the gram. Make you look foolish, mac...when I pull the piece: Monopoly scam. Tying in monopoly somehow in your setup would've made this better. The fact one can replace 'monopoly 'with other board games shows that it wasn't creative enough. This verse would be better for an audio battle or a freestyle. The bars like: "................... ......., no _____" don't belong in a text battle. They can be creative, but unless done perfectly, lack sting. Speaking of lacking sting..... when you boil it down, and look at just your punchlines, only 2/8 even diss him directly. That needs to be 8/8. This a 4/10. Vote: Mac