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05-03-2020, 12:26 PM
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Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
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Nice strong braggodocious verse man. Standard topic, but I liked the compounds and the imagery you put into this. The 'crip walk' punch was a standout line for sure. Made me crack a smile. Good sense of rhythm and vocab choice. I'll be checking out for more of your stuff.
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