Week 2: Adverse (0-1) vs. Aura (0-0) - AURA WINS

Saint · 04-17-2020, 12:22 PM

YouTube Ad, Tye Dolla, Opener was clever too

Adverse:
After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin'
Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him
[Didn't work for me, bc Oracles aren't mediums & wordplay is kill or cull? was choppy]
“Give me Cred and Neighbor!” This guy...with every breath he begs
He’s pleading the state for those same two things as they deny his section 8
[Liked the angle not punch]
He tries to be cool with the ladies, but you’re opposite - truth is
Aura couldn’t make a Hyundai if he went and bought her THAT new whip
[eh ok here]
Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son
Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon
[nah]
You're a new cat with 11 posts, finding personals there is fuckin hard
But if there was plenty of dirt I'd never find it cus i don't care who the fuck you are
[This is an old angle "No name/no dirt on em etc]

V Aura for the better put together verse & top 3 or so better hits

04-17-2020, 12:22 PM	#8
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	YouTube Ad, Tye Dolla, Opener was clever too Adverse: After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin' Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him [Didn't work for me, bc Oracles aren't mediums & wordplay is kill or cull? was choppy] “Give me Cred and Neighbor!” This guy...with every breath he begs He’s pleading the state for those same two things as they deny his section 8 [Liked the angle not punch] He tries to be cool with the ladies, but you’re opposite - truth is Aura couldn’t make a Hyundai if he went and bought her THAT new whip [eh ok here] Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon [nah] You're a new cat with 11 posts, finding personals there is fuckin hard But if there was plenty of dirt I'd never find it cus i don't care who the fuck you are [This is an old angle "No name/no dirt on em etc] V Aura for the better put together verse & top 3 or so better hits