Week 2: Adverse (0-1) vs. Aura (0-0) - AURA WINS

FGR · 04-15-2020, 11:32 PM

Aura's opener was cool.. read a lil choppy to me but the more I read it back the smoother it got.. not bad overall
Diverse was cool nameplay but wasn't that harsh saying will see all colors come together..
YouTube was nice.. I thought maybe adding a s on YouTube would of hit even better but still a nice hit..
Ty dolls was alright... Closer was a cool hit..
Overall u had a pretty tough verse...it was consistent with hits... Nothing that didn't hit...some more mild then others but it all still connected..
Adverses opener I didn't get.. from Oracle I am getting 'aura call'?? And I don't see how that ties in.. am I totally lost at what u were going for here
Section 8 didn't hit for me.... Hyundai was cool n connected for me . Oregon was mild... Closer was straight filler n didn't hit.. overall I gotta say u kinda dropped the ball here.. I never really felt like u "got going".. seemed inconsistent with ur hits.. nothing packed much sting and seemed like it was keyd up..
Overall I gotta say that pleth took this rather easy... Better written verse for the win.. ad had the Hyundai line..other than that it was mild for me..I didn't get your opener but even if I missed something in it that was super dope it doesn't chance the fact that pleth was more consistent with the hits VOTE: aura

04-15-2020, 11:32 PM	#6
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	Aura's opener was cool.. read a lil choppy to me but the more I read it back the smoother it got.. not bad overall Diverse was cool nameplay but wasn't that harsh saying will see all colors come together.. YouTube was nice.. I thought maybe adding a s on YouTube would of hit even better but still a nice hit.. Ty dolls was alright... Closer was a cool hit.. Overall u had a pretty tough verse...it was consistent with hits... Nothing that didn't hit...some more mild then others but it all still connected.. Adverses opener I didn't get.. from Oracle I am getting 'aura call'?? And I don't see how that ties in.. am I totally lost at what u were going for here Section 8 didn't hit for me.... Hyundai was cool n connected for me . Oregon was mild... Closer was straight filler n didn't hit.. overall I gotta say u kinda dropped the ball here.. I never really felt like u "got going".. seemed inconsistent with ur hits.. nothing packed much sting and seemed like it was keyd up.. Overall I gotta say that pleth took this rather easy... Better written verse for the win.. ad had the Hyundai line..other than that it was mild for me..I didn't get your opener but even if I missed something in it that was super dope it doesn't chance the fact that pleth was more consistent with the hits VOTE: aura Last edited by FGR; 04-15-2020 at 11:37 PM.