Week 2: Adverse (0-1) vs. Aura (0-0) - AURA WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Wednesday by 11:59 PM PST.
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@Adverse
@Aura

[Adverse]

Check

[Aura]

aka Dolla..



can't rhyme for shit. after losing last battle shoulda resigned & sit
judgin by wut'cha Put In Ur 2 Week,Letter bested dude & hopefully this time he'll quit
they say when u pass on lights emit of different shades like a beam
so when u Diverse, gonna see every color come together like MLK's i have a dream
be on life support, all kinds of shit in his mouth til he finds heaven
once the doc comes in and gives YouTube Ad, it'll all be over in 5 seconds
don't play fair. a loss or draw to this gay square, im gettin the glock kid
if i Ty Dolla Sign me out, or u'll be seeing his name on every clip like a tiktok vid
amid throwing lefts he'll see symbols circle over his head
so many stars around Verse, gonna look like Sinacog posted in our thread

[Adverse]

After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin'
Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him
“Give me Cred and Neighbor!” This guy...with every breath he begs
He’s pleading the state for those same two things as they deny his section 8
He tries to be cool with the ladies, but you’re opposite - truth is
Aura couldn’t make a Hyundai if he went and bought her THAT new whip
Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son
Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon
You're a new cat with 11 posts, finding personals there is fuckin hard
But if there was plenty of dirt I'd never find it cus i don't care who the fuck you are

[Blue Bayou]

Upp over exts

[FGR]

Aura's opener was cool.. read a lil choppy to me but the more I read it back the smoother it got.. not bad overall
Diverse was cool nameplay but wasn't that harsh saying will see all colors come together..
YouTube was nice.. I thought maybe adding a s on YouTube would of hit even better but still a nice hit..
Ty dolls was alright... Closer was a cool hit..
Overall u had a pretty tough verse...it was consistent with hits... Nothing that didn't hit...some more mild then others but it all still connected..
Adverses opener I didn't get.. from Oracle I am getting 'aura call'?? And I don't see how that ties in.. am I totally lost at what u were going for here
Section 8 didn't hit for me.... Hyundai was cool n connected for me . Oregon was mild... Closer was straight filler n didn't hit.. overall I gotta say u kinda dropped the ball here.. I never really felt like u "got going".. seemed inconsistent with ur hits.. nothing packed much sting and seemed like it was keyd up..
Overall I gotta say that pleth took this rather easy... Better written verse for the win.. ad had the Hyundai line..other than that it was mild for me..I didn't get your opener but even if I missed something in it that was super dope it doesn't chance the fact that pleth was more consistent with the hits VOTE: aura

[FGR]

I'm high af and did not realise I wrote that much of a vote lol

Shits longer than the verses

[Saint]

YouTube Ad, Tye Dolla, Opener was clever too

Adverse:
After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin'
Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him
[Didn't work for me, bc Oracles aren't mediums & wordplay is kill or cull? was choppy]
“Give me Cred and Neighbor!” This guy...with every breath he begs
He’s pleading the state for those same two things as they deny his section 8
[Liked the angle not punch]
He tries to be cool with the ladies, but you’re opposite - truth is
Aura couldn’t make a Hyundai if he went and bought her THAT new whip
[eh ok here]
Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son
Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon
[nah]
You're a new cat with 11 posts, finding personals there is fuckin hard
But if there was plenty of dirt I'd never find it cus i don't care who the fuck you are
[This is an old angle "No name/no dirt on em etc]

V Aura for the better put together verse & top 3 or so better hits

[Ender]

Aura
they say when u pass on lights emit of different shades like a beam
so when u Diverse, gonna see every color come together like MLK's i have a dream
be on life support, all kinds of shit in his mouth til he finds heaven
once the doc comes in and gives YouTube Ad, it'll all be over in 5 seconds
amid throwing lefts he'll see symbols circle over his head
so many stars around Verse, gonna look like Sinacog posted in our thread

Adverse
After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin'
Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him
Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son
Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon

I've got 3 quotables for Aura here, but it's really like 2.5, because the middle line wasn't worded properly both ways for me. It only really works if you read it as 'gives you a tube, Ad'. It doesn't work with 'doc comes in and gives YouTube Ad', because a doctor giving a youtube ad doesn't make sense. For Adverse, I'm assuming you meant 'they'll find Aura cool' in your first bar, as in cold and lifeless. I got 2 light quotables for Adverse. Aura's quotables were stronger and his wording, in general, was better.

Vote - Aura

[Wanderer]

Aura came harder of the two and was more concise. His drop read better to me. I dig that MLK bar but Adverse, I cant really quote anything from yours. Kind of a lacklustre battle IMO so not a lot to say other than that and imma vote: Aura

[Blue Bayou]

Aura wins