GWL WK 1: Adverse vs MMLP [ADVERSE WINS]

Inno · 03-20-2020, 07:58 PM

Technically sound vs imagery and emotion

Mmlp

Haven’t seen you in a while good to see your still letting lars write for you props. Anyway this was a solid showing my guy. Technically this is fire man you wrote this with a smooth calculator lol doesn’t make sense. Honestly I guess what’s missing in your verse is a bit of a more personal feel to your ish. It’s a good verse but lean towards verses with some semblance of emotion. Feel like you came a bit rigid for my liking. Good stuff for sure and look forward to reading more

Adverse

Man this was good, your a good writer. Dope imagery and emotion from your part. The complete opposite of your opponent which made for a dope battle. You stumbled a bit here and there but you made it up with great imagery. The emotion in your words could be felt and I dug that. You chose to go a route more relatable and I think that’s what got you over the hump against mmlp.

Honestly this is toss up for me I could vote for mmlp due to him dropping a more technically sound verse but I feel like adverse captures the topic a bit better to my liking. Like I said this to me a is a battle of preference. I chose adverse

Great battle guys enjoyed it. Sorry for voting so late been corona surfing

03-20-2020, 07:58 PM	#15
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Technically sound vs imagery and emotion Mmlp Haven’t seen you in a while good to see your still letting lars write for you props. Anyway this was a solid showing my guy. Technically this is fire man you wrote this with a smooth calculator lol doesn’t make sense. Honestly I guess what’s missing in your verse is a bit of a more personal feel to your ish. It’s a good verse but lean towards verses with some semblance of emotion. Feel like you came a bit rigid for my liking. Good stuff for sure and look forward to reading more Adverse Man this was good, your a good writer. Dope imagery and emotion from your part. The complete opposite of your opponent which made for a dope battle. You stumbled a bit here and there but you made it up with great imagery. The emotion in your words could be felt and I dug that. You chose to go a route more relatable and I think that’s what got you over the hump against mmlp. Honestly this is toss up for me I could vote for mmlp due to him dropping a more technically sound verse but I feel like adverse captures the topic a bit better to my liking. Like I said this to me a is a battle of preference. I chose adverse Great battle guys enjoyed it. Sorry for voting so late been corona surfing