GWL WK 1: Adverse vs MMLP [ADVERSE WINS]

Candy · 03-15-2020, 11:28 AM

ad:
staring into the soulless eyes - dope.. yeh i was feeling a bit some deep emotions it had a strong writers voice to it the flow was a lil bit loose but the delivery was cool as hell.. all in all pretty dope.

mm:
real cool dude rhyme scheme tight wording dope flow cool.. all in all a real good piece your descriptions were very detailed about simple things you def covered the computer really nicely and the world around it.. i like the slavery element you added to it.. pretty cool thanks..

vote = MMLP

his verse just had more detail in his story and was just a lil more compact.. gl guys thanks dope read

03-15-2020, 11:28 AM	#8
Candy Sell Her Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 1,075 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 8518432	ad: staring into the soulless eyes - dope.. yeh i was feeling a bit some deep emotions it had a strong writers voice to it the flow was a lil bit loose but the delivery was cool as hell.. all in all pretty dope. mm: real cool dude rhyme scheme tight wording dope flow cool.. all in all a real good piece your descriptions were very detailed about simple things you def covered the computer really nicely and the world around it.. i like the slavery element you added to it.. pretty cool thanks.. vote = MMLP his verse just had more detail in his story and was just a lil more compact.. gl guys thanks dope read __________________ curious más curioso y más curioso