State of Emergency

[Objective]

Originally Posted by Exis

Firstly, thanks for the feed on my joint with Cereal...Secondly it's hard to critique a piece when everyone thinks I'm shit lol.

Dude, I don't think anyone thinks you're shit. You got pretty good shit, people who are more experienced are pushing you to do even better tho. That's the culture of NCs, give cred but never be too satisfied/comfortable, always strive for perfection. Your words and feedback is valuable cus you represent a lot of people that may share the exact same thoughts, and it's up to me to figure out what I think is poignant to me. Either way, thought out feed is always appreciated regardless who it's coming from.
Plus, it's always easier to read shit from an outside perspective too, see mistakes and where stuff can be improved. When I first got involved with topicals etc. here I got destroyed but I put time and effort into my votes, I think I even made a verse at one point as my vote explaining it all, lol. People enjoyed my votes, got props and rep for them despite me being way worse. Outside perspective can open eyes, you may see something others don't etc.

Originally Posted by Exis

sometimes I think your word usage threw me off & seriously took me away from what was quite a well flowin' piece...That probably made no sense fam.

It was good, just wanted cleaner (not more complex) vocab bro...Stay upwards.

That's fair, and thanks for the cred. Cool that you enjoyed it and thanks for the read, appreciate the words from you as well @Master Rock. I can see how a cleaner vocab or wording in general could give it a lift here and there. Thanks for the feed.