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01-23-2020, 06:07 PM

Bodey

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this piece just seemed like you were freewriting and not really trying, more venting in some parts. lines like "my mind is a war" could be strengthened with imagery to that shit. I've seen better from you

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Originally Posted by Objective

Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.

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