Inspire me
 

Inspire me. Treat me like a puppet and wire me. Tired of my job-- fire me.

They say text is dead! That's only because I've been resting in my bed. Wrote the first two lines-- the rest is in my head. I'll believe anything, unless it's what you said.

I've tried it before. Trying to conform to societal norms. Inside my mind is a war, but I try to ignore. I've learned lately, that time doesn't warp.

I'm just taking the time to find phrases that rhyme. Who ghostwrote this? Maybe it's mine.(because)

I'm prolific; the most gifted, and SO twisted.

You're simply lame; I'm critically acclaimed.

Any time I make a flex piece? It stresses me, because there's no philosophical lessons B.

Basically bored, so I'll write something and say it some more. And when I'm done I'll find a hot woman and make her my whore.
Then make her do chores.

It's absurd. (It's)as if I was a nerd. Always thinking about words. I just walk around flipping the bird. Yo, you can copy me, but I did it first.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rnv220dVmZc

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LOK7rXD1fG8

This read like a Charles Hamilton track tbh. Could tell you're bored and need inspired, we could all use a bit of that sometimes

I liked the first line and the last line.
I didnt like anything else.
But I really liked those two lines,
sorta misdirection on the punch.

Inspire yourself nigga...

this piece just seemed like you were freewriting and not really trying, more venting in some parts. lines like "my mind is a war" could be strengthened with imagery to that shit. I've seen better from you

Thanks. It's more like something with consistent technical rhymes that I can actually rap Ok. But I'll write something deeper next time