Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 2. Mr. J Vs. 15. Diablo [Diablo 5-3]

Sinacog · 07-26-2019, 05:17 AM

Diablo -

interesting read, good lucks on the structure and imminent rhyme scheme - good work on the flow and vocal points of the story's portrayal. Very interesting work on this piece. Nice job.

MR. J -

Decent work on this piece - very good work on the details and structure; good work on the details of the piece and rhyme scheme. Good work on this piece, MR. J. Good work.

V/ Diablo..

07-26-2019, 05:17 AM	#11
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Diablo - interesting read, good lucks on the structure and imminent rhyme scheme - good work on the flow and vocal points of the story's portrayal. Very interesting work on this piece. Nice job. MR. J - Decent work on this piece - very good work on the details and structure; good work on the details of the piece and rhyme scheme. Good work on this piece, MR. J. Good work. V/ Diablo..