Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 3. Scar Vs. 14. Candy [Scar 5-2]

Sinacog · 07-23-2019, 02:02 AM

Candy -

good work this time on this piece, you've always been pretty clean with the pen here. you did nice with good colorful imagery and nice verse stanza. your wording is cool, and so is this verse. good work.

Scar -

good verse man, you did great. the imagery was really fantastic - and the story-line was good and effective. very good work on this piece scar. nice one man.

overall -

good battle, but scar won this battle with better use of language arts

07-23-2019, 02:02 AM	#6
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Candy - good work this time on this piece, you've always been pretty clean with the pen here. you did nice with good colorful imagery and nice verse stanza. your wording is cool, and so is this verse. good work. Scar - good verse man, you did great. the imagery was really fantastic - and the story-line was good and effective. very good work on this piece scar. nice one man. overall - good battle, but scar won this battle with better use of language arts