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Join Date: Jan 2013
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making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver ^Probably the best concept I've read from you yet and it works well. I've read your stuff throughout the years and this is definite progression from the last piece I read from you. Keep writing and focusing on line length/flow and rhymes. Shits getting better for sure.
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