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Miss Netcees 03-30-2019 10:57 AM

Boyfriend
 
Baby boy I know you heard I'm the good girl
Your boys tell you that you can do better
And baby that's the truth
But I dig something about you
I'm loving your swag
Don't care about them other dames
I'll be your Ryder or Die
I give it to you all night
Baby boy I'll take you high
Them other dames don't compare
and Independent man, making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver
He knows I'm a boss
I'm not scare to lose him now

Blas 03-30-2019 02:37 PM

was this about me babe? was really powerful stuff haha <3

Aero 03-30-2019 02:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blas (Post 733961)
was this about me babe? was really powerful stuff haha <3


Chill fam. She's all about me. She wants BBC.

Blas 03-30-2019 02:45 PM

if she needs small white dick she knows where to come, i'm fucking OUT

zelti 03-30-2019 03:07 PM

OmgStfu

Objective 03-30-2019 11:31 PM

making his own dough to pay bills
He loves some Silver
^Probably the best concept I've read from you yet and it works well.

I've read your stuff throughout the years and this is definite progression from the last piece I read from you. Keep writing and focusing on line length/flow and rhymes. Shits getting better for sure.

Miss Netcees 03-31-2019 10:13 AM

Thanks for feedback loves

Cereal 03-31-2019 01:44 PM

dope drop the silver line def the best, keep it up

Miss Netcees 03-31-2019 02:37 PM

Thanks love

Exis 03-31-2019 09:38 PM

I thought the alias change may have improved your shit, guess not...Havin' said that it's probably the best piece you've written.

Exis 03-31-2019 09:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blas (Post 733963)
if she needs small white dick she knows where to come, i'm fucking OUT

Did you just diss your penis...?

Blas 03-31-2019 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis (Post 734179)
Did you just diss your penis...?

yea, should i write a verse about it?

Exis 03-31-2019 10:47 PM

If you must, I'm sure Silver would read it...

Miss Netcees 03-31-2019 11:58 PM

Thanks


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