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03-29-2019, 07:18 AM
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Tread Lightly.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,533
Battle Record: 26-9
Champed - Netcees Battle League
- Battle Arena
- Tag Team Tournament III
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"
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Nice rhythm and rhymes from PA but conceptually it's pretty nothingish. Gotta diss your opponent more creatively or with more complexity.
Inc was too wordy but the attempt at the nameplay was better. Need to have a clearer connection to 'moans' though. Something like "gloc leave you crying in pain, no females getting attracted w/ Pheromones" V/ Inc
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