Dominate vs Blue Bayou - DOMINATE WINS

sral · 03-22-2019, 06:06 AM

I didn't like alliterating. Maybe I'm missing something there but other than a litter 8 its odd to me? Lol. Cullin erry was good wording. I liked mongolian landscapes. I wasn't feeling doohickeys too much but i'd not seen that before so it was kinda fresh to me. I didn't get numbers UP. Catering / K to ring was cool. Lady in The Tramp i've seen Alien do before, just not with muzzles. I didn't think much of the closer, it needed wording more harshly IMO

BB: Law Degree was worded dope, didnt get the Yankees line, Mickey G was just okay, deify i liked tbh, Crikey Guy i didnt get at all, popsockets I missed too tbh, break it off inside u was dope, funny iffy drops was cool

Good battle, some dope shit, some that completely went over my head on both sides, enjoyable reads from both though

I think I have BB taking it with like 1 bar more I enjoyed though. There's not a great deal in it between you. Good battle guys

03-22-2019, 06:06 AM	#10
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	I didn't like alliterating. Maybe I'm missing something there but other than a litter 8 its odd to me? Lol. Cullin erry was good wording. I liked mongolian landscapes. I wasn't feeling doohickeys too much but i'd not seen that before so it was kinda fresh to me. I didn't get numbers UP. Catering / K to ring was cool. Lady in The Tramp i've seen Alien do before, just not with muzzles. I didn't think much of the closer, it needed wording more harshly IMO BB: Law Degree was worded dope, didnt get the Yankees line, Mickey G was just okay, deify i liked tbh, Crikey Guy i didnt get at all, popsockets I missed too tbh, break it off inside u was dope, funny iffy drops was cool Good battle, some dope shit, some that completely went over my head on both sides, enjoyable reads from both though I think I have BB taking it with like 1 bar more I enjoyed though. There's not a great deal in it between you. Good battle guys __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)