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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy? Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus Blue Bayou Quote:
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are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… . . sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years |
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yeet
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Blue Bayou…
^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy? Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse -damn what a line Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes -ok I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals -lol kinda silly Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math -has this never been done wtf dope The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste -ok I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp -fire & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus -finisher was underwhelming are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree -decent wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees -fire real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. -ok obscure for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy -cool Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy -i can't quote this rip you called him the crikey guy like he's not Steve fucking Irwin stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover -a lot going on here but ok bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man -bit of a stretch the finisher was disconnected it felt he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years -ok I like it.[/QUOTE] Blue had a great verse but Dom really unloaded here it was like nothing but solid wordplays, beat him at their game you could say. Dom |
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Scream
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^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines Good wordplay, wording is a bit off for you.. I seen a litter w/p by spit right before i read it the first time, this was cool tho Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse cull... creative but not a word most people use ha, it still hit tho w/ the personal.. Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes This hit I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel & Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals Lol a bit corny but worked Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed & your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math Don't think ivev seen this, good one The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste Ok, catering was good wp but flip was alright nothing wild to me.. I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp muzzle part made this good here & soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus Ehh ok ender are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean… sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree creative opener.. wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees This was cool too.. took me a sec real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G. Ok reference looked up but not true to me tbh.. ok for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy worded well... good nothing else to say here Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy Lol i liked the concept but broken part was iffy to me stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover Not a fan of this one bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast wont even put the pump to you fam put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man hmmm its alright a bit too specific.. inside u he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years ok, phlymo did this way back it's ok/decent Blue started off good but seemed like he tried to reach for personal angles esp towards the end but he certainly had hitters.. first two.. deify etc.. Dom kept it consistent here even w/ the gunbars.. they were still direct & good tho usually I'll take a personal flipped creatively over it.. but Blue didn't really hit w/ me there imo not sure why i think the bars had alot going on but the concepts as a whole werent registering w/ me as damn..dope'.. Dom did that a lil better i thought this go round.. vote DOM
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Well looks like suth had Dom pretty clearly here..... Well he pmd domnamicz .... I'm sure he meant Dom. HEH SHOULD BE FINE. v dom |
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