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Old 02-11-2019, 12:26 AM   #17
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I aint racist butt ill beat yo black ass. U’ll get bodied in the street bum
No wonder white eyes are always on you, we wish we cud return u to Africa for a refund

Lol horrible Opener Zelph

All that “fuck 12” shit is dyin’ wen we meet. Ur Hands up cryin’ as u plea
Racist cops smilin’ at me, so it’s only natural we shoot u in ur back while you flee

Fiya cop flip

U bag hoes who are slimy and hella fat. Double chins & triple backs
All the fish in the sea n ur fuckin tht? U’ll end up w a whale for a daughter like Mr. Krabs

Ehhh corny, but ok

I’m at ur house w the goons, anyone comin’ outside will get got - I swear it
& if u pussies wnt come out ill have animals circling over the crib like a baby carriage

Creative and fiya!

The Nina has no favorites, she’ll destroy anyone just to take ur heart
A ratchet’ll end ur marriage.. and the side piece will tear ur family apart

Nice here again

His next girl compared our penis pics, I knew then to finger the hoe for a fuck
Your photos were such a reduction in size it took a thumbnail to open her up

On the Bayou wave with the penis bars I see, but this it aint it tho b. Miss here

Ur on that fat girl steez, totin the ratchet like “that’s my speed”
Bitch plz.. ima wig on body w/ clips to the head like black girl weave

Okish here! Wig/Black girl weave concepts kinda been used a lot

LONG SHOTTY! If it dnt finish em off I aint worried - my dawgs got me
Or drag a scalpel down his chest.. it’ll open up body at the morgue like an autopsy!


Fiya closer!


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U ain't built For Battling…so fuck any wordplay u yield,
Cuz u won't get a vote of confidence after this poll survey the field

Nice opener here!

AK felt the guns bark cuz I don't have a hesitant beagle,
Now I’ma let these ‘dogs come thru UR window’ like Resident Evil

This was okish! Think it could have been worded a little better on the execution

If ur in ‘arms reach’ then I’ma make ur fuckin jaw spin,
Or I’ll ‘breath fire’ & have u scorch by a flame thrower like Dhalsim

Nice jab here bro

There’s a fat chance this pig be eating loud as a bitch,
I bet Zelph be ‘hovering over the plate’ like batter crowdin the pitch4

Ehhh, this one kinda on the simple side for me, miss here

This dirty cop is in a bloody mess. It’s a Twister scene,
But if I let a ‘bald head clean up the situation’ it won’t be Mr. Clean

Baldhead/Mr. Clean joints are way outdated imo. Wording was coo tho

U look like a horse cop so I'ma leave a rival headless,
Until all we see is ur 'skull hanging by ur chest' like a tribal necklace

This was good here, seen the concept somewhere before, but still a hit for me!

Nigga I'ma fuckin animal. I got the crown in this battle,
U want beef? I’ll ‘pull up w/a Longhorn’ like a rancher roundin up cattle

Ehh, took me a minute on this one. I wanted to like this one so bad, but I just couldn't find a way too.

If the blade leaves his ‘uppercut’ I bet this chump break,
Cuz a ‘clean shot’ will ‘lift him off his feet’ like jumpin at a pump fake

Cool close out here!



Yo, props to both here. Nice read from both sides overall, but here's how it is. Pretty much tied in quotes and misses, but I got to take points off from Body here cause he had some concepts that were out of date or just been used to death. So I took off points for that which gave the edge to Zelph here. Props again to both!



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