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Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
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U in the lion's den.
U ain't built For Battling…so fuck any wordplay u yield, Cuz u won't get a vote of confidence after this poll survey the field AK felt the guns bark cuz I don't have a hesitant beagle, Now I’ma let these ‘dogs come thru UR window’ like Resident Evil If ur in ‘arms reach’ then I’ma make ur fuckin jaw spin, Or I’ll ‘breath fire’ & have u scorch by a flame thrower like Dhalsim There’s a fat chance this pig be eating loud as a bitch, I bet Zelph be ‘hovering over the plate’ like batter crowdin the pitch This dirty cop is in a bloody mess. It’s a Twister scene, But if I let a ‘bald head clean up the situation’ it won’t be Mr. Clean U look like a horse cop so I'ma leave a rival headless, Until all we see is ur 'skull hanging by ur chest' like a tribal necklace Nigga I'ma fuckin animal. I got the crown in this battle, U want beef? I’ll ‘pull up w/a Longhorn’ like a rancher roundin up cattle If the blade leaves his ‘uppercut’ I bet this chump break, Cuz a ‘clean shot’ will ‘lift him off his feet’ like jumpin at a pump fake |
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Retired
Join Date: Jul 2018
Posts: 647
Battle Record: 12-10
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Member
Join Date: Jul 2017
Posts: 35
Battle Record: 3-3
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I’m at ur house w the goons, anyone comin’ outside will get got - I swear it
& if u pussies wnt come out ill have animals circling over the crib like a baby carriage The Nina has no favorites, she’ll destroy anyone just to take ur heart A ratchet’ll end ur marriage.. and the side piece will tear ur family apart His next girl compared our penis pics, I knew then to finger the hoe for a fuck Your photos were such a reduction in size it took a thumbnail to open her up Ur on that fat girl steez, totin the ratchet like “that’s my speed” Bitch plz.. ima wig on body w/ clips to the head like black girl weave If ur in ‘arms reach’ then I’ma make ur fuckin jaw spin, Or I’ll ‘breath fire’ & have u scorch by a flame thrower like Dhalsim This dirty cop is in a bloody mess. It’s a Twister scene, But if I let a ‘bald head clean up the situation’ it won’t be Mr. Clean U look like a horse cop so I'ma leave a rival headless, Until all we see is ur 'skull hanging by ur chest' like a tribal necklace Nigga I'ma fuckin animal. I got the crown in this battle, U want beef? I’ll ‘pull up w/a Longhorn’ like a rancher roundin up cattle If the blade leaves his ‘uppercut’ I bet this chump break, Cuz a ‘clean shot’ will ‘lift him off his feet’ like jumpin at a pump fake mad close cuz zunto had some better hits but i got body with an extra hit body |
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,868
Battle Record: 17-32
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I thought both verses were pretty dope. Lots of creativity, humor, punches etc. This isn't my realm at all so I might be very off with my vote but I got Body edging it.
Even tho I understand why Zunto went for penis pics instead of dick pics the line sounded a bit weird to me, beside of that it was fire. Felt a bit uneasy about the white eyes on you line, might have just been me being a cringy white boy and overthinking "is he going over the edge or not?" Thought the following couplet was cool tho as it didn't seem as generic to me with the "go back to Africa"-bit if I should leave out the uneasiness. Enjoyed the flow throughout, overall a great verse I smiled here and there at, ok closure and a couple heavy hitters. 7.5/10 In terms of Body I definitely enjoyed the gaming references and the way they were set up (fuck those dogs tho), set ups and flow. Didn't stumble upon any lines I questioned as much and I guess that is what determined it for me as overall it's pretty close and I definitely enjoyed reading what you guys came up with. Good shit. Vote BodySnatcher.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o |
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