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Sinacog · 02-10-2019, 07:52 PM

'marry me openly. connect in every manner but socially
there's distance in space. our dynamic feels like Nasa promoted me'

this was pretty dope, the architect line was also pretty dope nice.

you always have good prose in your writtens, it's quite stylish and good. i enjoy it, and your flow and rhyme scheme is always on point. nice multi-syllabics and good rhyme scheme with flow..nice one. the topic is pretty cool, i do enjoy it..just a good written on relationship matters..it's pretty cool..I enjoyed it. I do enjoy your writtens, I see you have another OM which I'll read, but nice one man..keep writing..and keep dropping..lol..niice one..

02-10-2019, 07:52 PM	#9
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	'marry me openly. connect in every manner but socially there's distance in space. our dynamic feels like Nasa promoted me' this was pretty dope, the architect line was also pretty dope nice. you always have good prose in your writtens, it's quite stylish and good. i enjoy it, and your flow and rhyme scheme is always on point. nice multi-syllabics and good rhyme scheme with flow..nice one. the topic is pretty cool, i do enjoy it..just a good written on relationship matters..it's pretty cool..I enjoyed it. I do enjoy your writtens, I see you have another OM which I'll read, but nice one man..keep writing..and keep dropping..lol..niice one..