mercy me

Sinacog · 01-31-2019, 01:23 PM

Hello, Dead Man. I enjoyed this piece, allow me to leave it feed-back..lol...

Good work on mostly a lot of things here. Your word association is always top notch here..with lots of cool word combinations and verbiage use. Your imagery is also pretty cool and slick, rhyme schemes are nice, flow was niche'. Nice one, man. I enjoy the 'mercy me' play on things - kind of a nice way to play on things; - that you don't really want to end your life at all really..you're having too much fun..lol..but this was cool and fresh. Nice one, man. I enjoyed the read, props! Good work..keep writing...!

01-31-2019, 01:23 PM	#15
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Hello, Dead Man. I enjoyed this piece, allow me to leave it feed-back..lol... Good work on mostly a lot of things here. Your word association is always top notch here..with lots of cool word combinations and verbiage use. Your imagery is also pretty cool and slick, rhyme schemes are nice, flow was niche'. Nice one, man. I enjoy the 'mercy me' play on things - kind of a nice way to play on things; - that you don't really want to end your life at all really..you're having too much fun..lol..but this was cool and fresh. Nice one, man. I enjoyed the read, props! Good work..keep writing...!