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01-26-2019, 02:19 AM
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This was a pretty good piece, Dead Man. It had all the essentials for a good topical piece. Nice poetics, and rhyme schemes you got here. Good form of rhyme scheme and narrative as-well. I enjoy these kind of drops, there fun to read in a way. The imagery was pretty well done, and you had nice prose. Your narrative was pretty good - nice subtle spot in this. Overall - a good read. Keep dropping here.
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