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green forest melancholia. i led you to faith
separate entirely, together remained molecular tangles our cozy nest DNA its conceptual, lately i've felt a definite change synchronic relative wavelength. half-arrested restraint anorexic, poor girl who never finished a plate broccoli and steak. 10-kilometer days. glitch in your matrices fictional make-believe my promises made art and independence there's a common engagement growing colder the moment i cast it out into space hours to waste in solitude like so many gravestones so far removed i've just about forgotten how to embrace it power pose, powder facelift mascara clouding her gaze opal eyes, diamond bracelet, open wide, let her taste it winebags in our pancreas and blood in our teeth functional creep masquerading as the sum of his pieces rather than something opaque, shadowy, see-thru film projection after all the credits are raised neural system nervous sympathetic by nature existing most organic in the mind of stranger / |
Reserved for feed.
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Dude yeah. Will read again. Really refreshing to jump into.
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This was cool man...
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Nice.
Hows that nook coming |
This was very short, yet sweet from you...first 4 lines were dope.
Sorry for bein' a dickhead for like a decade...readin' your shit is always therapeutic Black. Stay doin' you. |
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This was a pretty good piece, Dead Man. It had all the essentials for a good topical piece. Nice poetics, and rhyme schemes you got here. Good form of rhyme scheme and narrative as-well. I enjoy these kind of drops, there fun to read in a way. The imagery was pretty well done, and you had nice prose. Your narrative was pretty good - nice subtle spot in this. Overall - a good read. Keep dropping here.
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