Apeshit

Eŋg · 09-07-2018, 09:52 AM

notice the 'a' after the 'l' instead of an 'e' - i'm not talking about the ancient king.

this was fun. kinetic rhymes. some interesting spells of wordplay. remind me of chyeah (who is actually good at what he does despite constantly being jawed at). the vibe itself is only really one that catches me when i'm high and (try) freestyling. going bananas. m'baku is a good, if racist, character in the marvel universe.

schemes are an interesting thing in of themselves and i find maintaining a string to be very predictable for a reader, but maintaining several strings, or morphing the string, and having it co-exist with content, is interesting. generally just playing with the reader's expectation and its own aural quality. it's a lot more creative to me.

even if you dig up old pieces you're a prolific writer, which is cool. something i haven't been for years. keep doing you.

09-07-2018, 09:52 AM	#5
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	notice the 'a' after the 'l' instead of an 'e' - i'm not talking about the ancient king. this was fun. kinetic rhymes. some interesting spells of wordplay. remind me of chyeah (who is actually good at what he does despite constantly being jawed at). the vibe itself is only really one that catches me when i'm high and (try) freestyling. going bananas. m'baku is a good, if racist, character in the marvel universe. schemes are an interesting thing in of themselves and i find maintaining a string to be very predictable for a reader, but maintaining several strings, or morphing the string, and having it co-exist with content, is interesting. generally just playing with the reader's expectation and its own aural quality. it's a lot more creative to me. even if you dig up old pieces you're a prolific writer, which is cool. something i haven't been for years. keep doing you. Last edited by Eŋg; 09-07-2018 at 09:55 AM.