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Old 10-02-2018, 02:28 PM   #1
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I knew she wanted fame, shot a movie and explained
Bared necessities of life - popped dat coochie in da frame

ungh.
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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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Old 10-02-2018, 03:46 PM   #2
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I knew she wanted fame, shot a movie and explained
Bared necessities of life - popped dat coochie in da frame

ungh.

nigga tied it in a line earlier with

She Baloo me fa the chain

tryna fuck with our heads and shit smh, I even forgot about the Jay and Bey Apeshit theme

anyways

Or be locked in a cage like a gotdamn chimp
I'm a Ceasar on these streets - a Sultan to the sheiks
And all a Ge-nies is a flawless ass freak
On sum Abu Dhabi sheets (a-ladd-in the East)
But I represent the West, where monkeys get greased
For beatin on they chest - we'll empty out the clip
And leave em sunken with the fishes
For tryna throw a wrench - we ain't wit the monkey business
"You Mighty Joe, huh?" You might need jo gun
Cos the youngins going bongo
From McNola slums to jungles of Chicago


you managed to tie in Planet of the Apes, Jungle Book, Aladdin, King Kong, Rampage, Mighty Joe young. My only gripe is you didn't end with Congo for the closer to make it rhyme lol

YOU WENT ABSOLUTELY APE!! my typa shit
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