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08-28-2018, 09:13 PM
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NJ Devil
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,036
Battle Record: Who Cares
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Raizen (0-1) vs Witty (0-1) - Witty wins via NS
NBL Season 11 Week 2 Due SUNDAY 9/02/18 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT - IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls!
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Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk |
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08-29-2018, 06:37 AM
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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 16,978
Battle Record: 30-41
Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded
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Here.
10.
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
Explicit and poisonous violent crime.  |
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09-02-2018, 05:47 PM
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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 16,978
Battle Record: 30-41
Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded
Champed - Lyric Olympics
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Really don't think this guys going to show. Luckily I need an extension so he has until tomorrow.
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
Explicit and poisonous violent crime. |
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09-03-2018, 07:43 PM
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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 16,978
Battle Record: 30-41
Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded
Champed - Lyric Olympics
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Rep Power: 85235118 |
Listen...
That verse last week was ass cheeks...it'll take more than this young punk to play me I bet you don't even show...prolly still hungover after you got fucked up by JD I'll battle u in front of ur friends @ a party, n win....when these frees blaze it's the truth When I enter, the party dead as fuck...I throw a couple punches, n leave Raizen the roof Idgaf bout how ur eagle sprays, or ur lethal blades...shit corny cuz u a bum, it's fake shit U need a Raize...I get as depressed reading ur verses, as u get reading ur payslip Bro, u ain't in a gang that make gats bust...u make that up...u ain't known for force Ur crew imaginary, u got more soldiers in ur head than the Trojan Horse Back to basics, eradicate this faggot, straight emasculate him...plain savage Smash his face in...play havoc ...crazed, manic, insane...leave his brain damaged like Masta Ace's
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
Explicit and poisonous violent crime. Last edited by Witty; 09-03-2018 at 08:38 PM. |
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09-04-2018, 09:20 AM
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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 16,978
Battle Record: 30-41
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Lemme get some feedback. That last line was filler cuz I knew he wasn't showing and got bored.
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He listens to voices inside of his mind
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09-04-2018, 10:02 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2015
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Battle Record: 52-28
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Whole verse was good, no misses to me other than the closer
Raizen the roof might’ve got some critique just because it kind of doesn’t work both ways, if you’d leave him in the roof it would read different I would think |
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09-04-2018, 10:44 AM
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NJ Devil
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This was dope
Trojan horse was sick I like raising the roof too
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09-04-2018, 10:49 AM
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Senior Member
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Good drop, I don’t think Raiz would have beaten this |
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