Netcees - Raizen (0-1) vs Witty (0-1)

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- - Raizen (0-1) vs Witty (0-1) - Witty wins via NS (http://netcees.org/showthread.php?t=131935)

Raizen (0-1) vs Witty (0-1) - Witty wins via NS

NBL Season 11
Week 2

Due SUNDAY 9/02/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE

Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Really don't think this guys going to show. Luckily I need an extension so he has until tomorrow.

Listen...

That verse last week was ass cheeks...it'll take more than this young punk to play me
I bet you don't even show...prolly still hungover after you got fucked up by JD
I'll battle u in front of ur friends @ a party, n win....when these frees blaze it's the truth
When I enter, the party dead as fuck...I throw a couple punches, n leave Raizen the roof
Idgaf bout how ur eagle sprays, or ur lethal blades...shit corny cuz u a bum, it's fake shit
U need a Raize...I get as depressed reading ur verses, as u get reading ur payslip
Bro, u ain't in a gang that make gats bust...u make that up...u ain't known for force
Ur crew imaginary, u got more soldiers in ur head than the Trojan Horse
Back to basics, eradicate this faggot, straight emasculate him...plain savage
Smash his face in...play havoc
...crazed, manic, insane...leave his brain damaged like Masta Ace's

Lemme get some feedback. That last line was filler cuz I knew he wasn't showing and got bored.

Whole verse was good, no misses to me other than the closer

Raizen the roof might’ve got some critique just because it kind of doesn’t work both ways, if you’d leave him in the roof it would read different I would think

This was dope
Trojan horse was sick

I like raising the roof too

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty (Post 698840)

Listen...

That verse last week was ass cheeks...it'll take more than this young punk to play me
I bet you don't even show...prolly still hungover after you got fucked up by JD
Decent
I'll battle u in front of ur friends @ a party, n win....when these frees blaze it's the truth
When I enter, the party dead as fuck...I throw a couple punches, n leave Raizen the roof
Tight
Idgaf bout how ur eagle sprays, or ur lethal blades...shit corny cuz u a bum, it's fake shit
U need a Raize...I get as depressed reading ur verses, as u get reading ur payslip
Not bad
Bro, u ain't in a gang that make gats bust...u make that up...u ain't known for force
Ur crew imaginary, u got more soldiers in ur head than the Trojan Horse
Cool
Back to basics, eradicate this faggot, straight emasculate him...plain savage
Smash his face in...play havoc
...crazed, manic, insane...leave his brain damaged like Masta Ace's
Actually liked this

Good drop, I don’t think Raiz would have beaten this