WK 10: DMS 3-0 vs. Incredible 2-3 - INCREDIBLE WINS

DynamiCz · 07-18-2018, 08:04 PM

You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield

Very light here fam...decent

I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream
My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’

Concept was coo, but the execution to the punch was light. Weak jab here

Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice
This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent.

Nahhh b, wasn't to much rocking with this one

Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay.
Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay

This was decent here, best line out of your verse to me.....

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Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin

Coo opener here! Wording is stretched as you read

That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own
Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome

Light jab here, decent concept I guess

Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library
No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very!

Lol, funny jab here, it was decent

Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out?
Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct."

Funny closer here!

Props to both! No brainer here Inc gets this with better overall verse all the way around. DMS needs some work in some areas, but its all good keep at it homie.

1HunDo

V-Inc

07-18-2018, 08:04 PM	#7
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield Very light here fam...decent I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’ Concept was coo, but the execution to the punch was light. Weak jab here Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent. Nahhh b, wasn't to much rocking with this one Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay. Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay This was decent here, best line out of your verse to me..... -------- Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin & After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin Coo opener here! Wording is stretched as you read That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome Light jab here, decent concept I guess Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very! Lol, funny jab here, it was decent Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out? Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct." Funny closer here! Props to both! No brainer here Inc gets this with better overall verse all the way around. DMS needs some work in some areas, but its all good keep at it homie. 1HunDo V-Inc __________________ ...ThA New ErA...